She smacks her lips loudly and brings it over to the table. She frowns at the table, it was covered in wrappers and bits of trash from all the other food she ate. She lowers a hoof and dumps all the trash on the floor, then places the tub of fat on the table and sits down. She pops the top and looks around for a spoon. Not seeing one, she dunks her hoof in and starts shoveling the lard-like substance into her mouth, chewing loudly.
Woo! What a way to start this collection off with the most recent clop sensation of the web. Though the mind degradation, while fitting, wasn't really on my taste. Still superbly done for a quickie. One more thing, I kinda wish I could've read about those two other teats poking out.
3809844 Soooooo do you know where Rarity cow come from, kinda reminds me of the Rarity vs a Giant Crab thing ……. So can we have a chapter of Rarity defeating a giant crab and turning into one, cause that would be kool
3810481 Apparently like two weeks ago someone posted a picture of fat Rarity looking at her body and saying "Why did this happen to me!?" Then someone made a cheap edit giving her black spots and the text was changed to "Why did this happen to moooo?"
Then someone made an actual Raricow pic, and then someone liked it and made another, and then another, and the whole thing snowballed.
... This is weird. I was just on a chat board like, last week, talking about cows... Well, like this. First it was just milk, then it got into milking, and then it spiraled down to where we were discussing bestiality. I suppose that's just me having too much internet, though.
Too many run-on sentences and dull descriptions. Despite being 7k words long, the rushed pacing and blunt prose just made it a non-erotic chore to read.
This is especially noticeable with the mental aspect. My personal favorite part of MC stories is the gradual loss of control and the progression of the act, and it didn't feel substantial in this story because those aspects were missing or skimmed over. You could say that of every aspect, but again, this is where it's most severe.
It seems like every time a clopfic that caters to my fetishes pops up in the feature box, the writing is absolutely terrible. Product of pandering, I guess.
3812123 Far enough. I admit, compared to chapter 1, chapter 2 was a little rushed. That being said, I never intended for ch2 to be a clop chapter, so that's why I never really went into details describing the sex. But you have a fair point on the mental changes being too sudden. It would have been nice having a few more scenes early on showing the initial, gradual mental TF after each milking in that tub.
Love farm animal TFs, but this one-... One little thing is keeping me from really liking it: It flies in the face of canon. So much so I'd say this story (and kind'a this whole collection, really) needs to be marked AU--I think I would have liked this a lot more if I was prepared for that.
The cows of FiM are clearly capable of speech. While I'll give it up that they are, at the least, fairly implied to be less intelligent/controlled by instincts to a much larger extent than ponies, this goes too far.
Also, that ending... just... forced cruelty that doesn't manage to strike as I think it was meant to. Got'ta say, though, that Twilight not being able to tell the reality of the situation reminds me of Life-Like Fluttershy Doll, which is only a good thing--a sign that something about that scene was trying to go in the right direction...
Rarity leans back as she swallows another hoof full of shortening. She looks around the kitchen, admiring the mess she made in the past 12 hours. She knows she normally keeps this place spotless but right now... Rarity shrugs, feeling really at home living in a filthy place. She sniffs her foreleg, her nose burning at the rancid smell of twelve hours of sweat and cow milk soaking into her fur. Rarity feels a tingle go down her spine when she realizes just how dirty she has become. It felt really good to her, to just let it all go for once. Drop all the prissy formalities and proper etiquette. Just live naturally for once, you know, like an animal or something.
That you could do a follow up with Raricow's milk having the same effects as the potion she drank. She could thus "Generously" infect the whole two through one of the following methods
1)She's infected the entire Apple Acres milk supply through her use of the auto-milker and it spreads to the town from there, from Sugarcube corner using the milk in baking to the typical milk cartoon route 2) She left behind that 'milk bath' back at Carousel Boutique, and Sweetie Belle seems conspicuously absent in this story maybe she found it take thinking it was one of her big sisters beauty treatments and wanting to be more like her took a dip, or Fluttershy comes by looking for Rarity for their Spa day finds it and does so, either that or the CMC find it and use it to set up their own milk stand or make cheese for cheese sale.
Wow! You really turned the CMC into complete idiots. The sad part is that I can see them actually behaving this stupidly. It still kinda angers me though. If I ever found out I would probably kill one of them in a blind rage.
3826574 Lucky you, when I first started reading your stories, I hadn't seen the movie yet, so it's just recent in my mind. 4082604 slow down there, Discord. There's already another story in this set just for that.
This type of story scares me for some reason. Maybe it's the fact that an important character from such an adorable show was removed entirely because of a mistake on several ponies parts. Plus, nopony knows what exactly happened, and nopony knows why it had to happen. It also has to do with the fact that it was TOTALLY PREVENTABLE, and she is pretty much dead now. "Without mind, and without body, is, in essentiality, death." -Julian Williams
So. Rarity essentially died, it's in part Applejack's fault, more so AB's and Scoot's fault. A cow was essentially killed to recreate Rarity, entirely AB and Scoot's fault.
I was about to say I liked this story, until that last sting where Rarity essentially died, not to mention the sadly accurate stupidity of Scootaloo, but... yeah Applebloom may not be the most obedient filly but I doubt she'd ignore a warning of Applejack's like that, especially were the farm is concerned.
I will at least give you credit over the other Cow tf story I found on this site that at least Twilight and Applejack are treating the situation like they should with the worry they should. I want to write a follow up to this where they can save Rarity, my main idea is that to recreate Rarity's memory they need to get something close to her, her element of harmony but when they try it on the other cow it doesn't work, or maybe Applebloom overhears or asks about this and finally confesses when she realizes what's so serious.
If only there was some way Rarity could cancel this transformation right now...
Edit 4/11/2018:
Applejack comes to a dead stop as she spots the intruder Winona is barking at.
Rarity, honey, you’re going to thank me for this later.
confirming that there is an open bag of corn feed and a water trough
Inside the stable, Rarity continues to gorge herself on the corn feed.
Scootaloo smiles devilishly. “You thinking what I’m thinking Applebloom?”
Had a feeling Scootaloo was going to be the one to check out the stables.
Rarity hears the name name Bessie
Scootaloo trots around outside the stables.
The bull sniffs the air and looks over at the the newest member of the herd.
Rarity chews her grass as she lumbers across the pasture,
I really wish she stayed a pony with an udder and cow spots. Then later got a milking machine to milk her and she gets aroused by this. Then possibly somehow mating with another pony or Sweetie Belle somehow drinks the milk/potion and gains an udder and cow spots too.
Oh, and for this chapter, you cloppers out there should go to Depibooru and search "Raricow" with the mature filter off.
So.. much... Rarity cow
You see, nothing is more perfect.
Ew...
(Now to finish reading.)
Woo! What a way to start this collection off with the most recent clop sensation of the web. Though the mind degradation, while fitting, wasn't really on my taste. Still superbly done for a quickie. One more thing, I kinda wish I could've read about those two other teats poking out.
3809844 Soooooo do you know where Rarity cow come from, kinda reminds me of the Rarity vs a Giant Crab thing
……. So can we have a chapter of Rarity defeating a giant crab and turning into one, cause that would be kool
3810481
Apparently like two weeks ago someone posted a picture of fat Rarity looking at her body and saying "Why did this happen to me!?"
Then someone made a cheap edit giving her black spots and the text was changed to "Why did this happen to moooo?"
Then someone made an actual Raricow pic, and then someone liked it and made another, and then another, and the whole thing snowballed.
... This is weird. I was just on a chat board like, last week, talking about cows... Well, like this. First it was just milk, then it got into milking, and then it spiraled down to where we were discussing bestiality. I suppose that's just me having too much internet, though.
Too many run-on sentences and dull descriptions. Despite being 7k words long, the rushed pacing and blunt prose just made it a non-erotic chore to read.
This is especially noticeable with the mental aspect. My personal favorite part of MC stories is the gradual loss of control and the progression of the act, and it didn't feel substantial in this story because those aspects were missing or skimmed over. You could say that of every aspect, but again, this is where it's most severe.
It seems like every time a clopfic that caters to my fetishes pops up in the feature box, the writing is absolutely terrible. Product of pandering, I guess.
3812123
Far enough. I admit, compared to chapter 1, chapter 2 was a little rushed. That being said, I never intended for ch2 to be a clop chapter, so that's why I never really went into details describing the sex. But you have a fair point on the mental changes being too sudden. It would have been nice having a few more scenes early on showing the initial, gradual mental TF after each milking in that tub.
Oh well, c'est la vie.
Amazing story.
Great work, I really enjoyed it!
Love farm animal TFs, but this one-... One little thing is keeping me from really liking it: It flies in the face of canon. So much so I'd say this story (and kind'a this whole collection, really) needs to be marked AU--I think I would have liked this a lot more if I was prepared for that.
The cows of FiM are clearly capable of speech. While I'll give it up that they are, at the least, fairly implied to be less intelligent/controlled by instincts to a much larger extent than ponies, this goes too far.
Also, that ending... just... forced cruelty that doesn't manage to strike as I think it was meant to. Got'ta say, though, that Twilight not being able to tell the reality of the situation reminds me of Life-Like Fluttershy Doll, which is only a good thing--a sign that something about that scene was trying to go in the right direction...
3816126
Mmm, I do have a bold disclaimer right at the top of this chapter. It reads as follows:
I do suppose it is a little AU though.
3816211
Stupid me... How did I miss that?
-but still, no, it's not "a little AU". "Alternate Universe" does not come in scales; it is, or it isn't, and this is.
I think I love you.
3826562
Thank you! No one else actually commented on that reference
I built up to that for like, 1/4 of the chapter too
3826574
That part remind me of this pic:
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Any thoughts on doing a sequel on this?
The idea occurred to me after I saw this image
http://utrale.deviantart.com/art/Raricow-TF-429133490
That you could do a follow up with Raricow's milk having the same effects as the potion she drank. She could thus "Generously" infect the whole two through one of the following methods
1)She's infected the entire Apple Acres milk supply through her use of the auto-milker and it spreads to the town from there, from Sugarcube corner using the milk in baking to the typical milk cartoon route
2) She left behind that 'milk bath' back at Carousel Boutique, and Sweetie Belle seems conspicuously absent in this story maybe she found it take thinking it was one of her big sisters beauty treatments and wanting to be more like her took a dip, or Fluttershy comes by looking for Rarity for their Spa day finds it and does so, either that or the CMC find it and use it to set up their own milk stand or make cheese for cheese sale.
Wow! You really turned the CMC into complete idiots.
The sad part is that I can see them actually behaving this stupidly.
It still kinda angers me though. If I ever found out I would probably kill one of them in a blind rage.
3826574 Lucky you, when I first started reading your stories, I hadn't seen the movie yet, so it's just recent in my mind.
4082604 slow down there, Discord. There's already another story in this set just for that.
This type of story scares me for some reason. Maybe it's the fact that an important character from such an adorable show was removed entirely because of a mistake on several ponies parts. Plus, nopony knows what exactly happened, and nopony knows why it had to happen. It also has to do with the fact that it was TOTALLY PREVENTABLE, and she is pretty much dead now.
"Without mind, and without body, is, in essentiality, death." -Julian Williams
So. Rarity essentially died, it's in part Applejack's fault, more so AB's and Scoot's fault. A cow was essentially killed to recreate Rarity, entirely AB and Scoot's fault.
All in all, that's fucked up.
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6117995 Hey, Titanfall, do you want to go bowling?
I was about to say I liked this story, until that last sting where Rarity essentially died, not to mention the sadly accurate stupidity of Scootaloo, but... yeah Applebloom may not be the most obedient filly but I doubt she'd ignore a warning of Applejack's like that, especially were the farm is concerned.
I will at least give you credit over the other Cow tf story I found on this site that at least Twilight and Applejack are treating the situation like they should with the worry they should. I want to write a follow up to this where they can save Rarity, my main idea is that to recreate Rarity's memory they need to get something close to her, her element of harmony but when they try it on the other cow it doesn't work, or maybe Applebloom overhears or asks about this and finally confesses when she realizes what's so serious.
Edit 4/11/2018:
Had a feeling Scootaloo was going to be the one to check out the stables.
I really wish she stayed a pony with an udder and cow spots. Then later got a milking machine to milk her and she gets aroused by this. Then possibly somehow mating with another pony or Sweetie Belle somehow drinks the milk/potion and gains an udder and cow spots too.
Oof, dark ending.