Chapter Twenty Four
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Sweetie Belle and the School of Witchcraft and Wizardry
24
It had all been thanks to Prof. Valery Blackwood that Sweetie Belle was no longer being mauled by most of Hogwart's staff.
Okay, less mauled and more mass hugged.
Well, for Sweetie Belle it was a severe mauling.
She never wanted to be hugged by Rettimus Snape ever again.
Why was the staff mass mauling the little filly?
Well, simply because she'd entered not too long before a staff meeting was to begin. Shortly after the teachers started arriving, Sweetie Belle started getting more and more hugs from all of them.
Thankfully, Prof. Blackwood was somehow unaffected by the strange charm that had been placed upon the filly.
Exhausted, Sweetie Belle was carried by none other than Hagrid back to her own room where she could recuperate and recover.
As she slept, she was unaware of a deep starry glow that emanated from the Lunar Wand, wrapping around her horn and intertwining with her own pale green magic...
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Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy tossed and turned in his sleep. Never before had he had trouble sleeping, but tonight, something felt wrong.
He didn't notice the swirling blue/green starry filled pony form pass unhindered through the dorm wall. Nor did he notice the tiny form float over him for a few moments before diving into his head.
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Scorpius bolted upright and looked around. His vision was slightly blurred from sleep, but quickly cleared.
"This isn't my room..." He looked around the brightly colored room, filled with all sorts of toys.
Oddly, the dolls were all of ponies or griffons or other such creatures. There were paintings on the walls depicting beautiful, bright landscapes, including a tall castle jutting majestically from the side of a high pinical mountain.
"The hell is all this?" He sat up and slipped out from the bed, only to fall over onto his face, his balance somehow failing him. "Ugh, what?" He pushed himself up with his hands, and got a good look at a pair of soft pink hooves, an equally soft pink and fluffy coat, and a feeling of dread that now filled his entire being.
Had that little witch wanna-be done to him what she had done to his brother? Almost panicking, Scorpius spotted a tall, full length mirror and dragged himself over. Peaking into view of his reflection, he came face to face with a pony.
It had to be, maybe, a little larger than Phineas as a pony. Soft pink, fluffy coat, his own hair style and color, and his own blue eyes, only larger than ever before. He looked so damned cute.
But unlike Phineas, he lacked wings, and unlike Sweetie Belle, no horn either.
"What the devil?" He stood up and glared at his reflection, feeling his forehead and sides. "Why don't I have a horn or wings? What did that little witch do to me."
"We did nothing." A gentle, soft voice spoke.
Looking into mirror, Scorpius saw a strange blue and green ghostly being with what looked like stars floating within floated there. Turning around, the colt saw nothing. Looking back he watched the strange entity emerge from the mirror like it was a pool of water.
"Thou who would torment us." It hovered around Scorpius. "Thou who would torment thy own flesh and blood." It hovered above the now cowering colt, seeming to grow larger. "Thou who shalt now be punished for thy vile deeds." It lunged, a massive maw expanding, filled with sharp teeth.
Scorpius screamed and bolted. He ran for the door, but it was no longer there. Rather, he found himself running down an endless corridor, that massive maw devouring everything in its path.
The colt spotted a door and dove through, slamming it shut behind him. His chest was heaving for breath now. "What the devil was that? It sounded like... Almost like Sweetie Belle and another, deeper voice at the same time. But how could she do that. This isn't an illusion. There's no way to make one this complex... Is there?"
He did have to admit that he had no understanding of the little pony's magical extent. After all, she could use both a wand and her own magic from that horn of hers.
Finally, he caught his breath and looked around the oddly warped room. White and pink tiles covered the floor while slightly warped pillars of white and pink marble held up... clouds?
All along floor, lining the walls, were stuffed animals of all sorts.
No, not animals, people.
Approaching a pile, he recognized some of them. Muggles he'd tormented in the past.
Looking at more of the plush humans and animals, he came to remember each and every one of them. Animals, muggles, mudbloods, and even some purebloods that he had made to be fools or minions through the use of his manipulation or magic.
"What is all this?" He asked nobody. He was the only one here after all, right?
"We are the tormented. The damned. The cursed." The dolls started lifting their heads, some starting to drag themselves with sharp, choppy movements. It was like something out of a horror movie that Scorpius would watch and laugh at.
Only now he was not laughing.
He had no magic to blast these dolls, even as they took on horrific, twisted features.
"Uh... Bugger this..." He turned back to the door and threw it open, only to see an endless abyss past deadly sharp, gnashing teeth. "Eeep!" He jumped back, slamming the door shut and spun about. He spotted the door on the far side of the room and made a mad break for it. Jumping, diving, sliding, bounding off pillars, all to avoid the nightmare dolls. Some nearly caught him, yet he managed to reach the door.
Only to find it was locked. Looking back, he saw nothing but a wall of those he'd hurt in the past...
They engulfed him, and each in turn showed him the life they lived while under Scorpius' magic or manipulations.
Cruelty, pain, suffering, starvation, homeless, and so much more, all because of Scorpius.
All he could do now was scream...
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To Be Continued...
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Awww, that's cute! The wand likes it's little pony!
ummm, is it wrong to say i enjoyed that? cause i did.
6232187 Keep reading, lol
6232164 Last time I tried writing and detailing how everyone/thing looked or every action they made, the chapters were nearly twice or thrice as long... I got ripped a new one for detailing every little thing, so I stopped doing that. Don't like it, that's fine.
Have issued with my style of writing, you are free to keep reading or not, your choice.
So many updates!
Ah, this is better than a latrine. This is karmic retribution.
6232203 Well, you should never tie yourself down to one writing style. Some descriptions of things can go a long way. Too much? Of course that can be bad, but if you want your story to be like that then do it. But too much is way better than almost nothing at all.
And I just personally dislike using the Equestria girls universe for every single crossover, especially when it's not believable for the chosen universe, like this one.
6232164 Well, this IS the future of the Harry Potter universe, so that law COULD have been abolished at this point (I can certainly imagine both Harry and Hermione pushing for it to be); which would leave no logical reason TO bring it up so far.
And no matter how much potential you feel it would have given the story, not having a wand would have NULLFIED Sweetie's reason for being at Hogwarts at all. Hogwarts teaches Wanded Magic, not Horned Magic; meaning that without the wand the school would have been able to teach her next-to-nothing.
6232290 Well, no, this is NOT the same universe as EQG. The humans look HUMAN, like in the HP universe, which this is.
6232353 There is that, yes. I'd actually totally forgot about that little law. Let's go with your reasoning, as it is sound. Laws are changed all the time after all.
Fantastic work once again. I whole heartedly approve the punishment for Scorpius. But I also hope that he faces some legal trouble too. I can't imagine the mind control spells he used being anywhere near legal. Far too close to slavery etc. Far as I can see that should be a very high crime. I wouldn't be surprised if his wand was taken permanently with him being forbidden from ever using magic again. Taking another beings free will like that is one of the most disgusting things you can do to another sapient being.
6232361 Then why even use the mirror?
6232398 Plot device.
Heh, I said plot.
HA!
Take that, Scorpiass!
Scorpiass, take what you've deserved!
Great story, by the way. I couldn't stop reading it 'till I finish.
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isn't the mirror used as a portal in various other lore. Such as Alice in Wonderland ect. It isnt wrong to assume it's the same as the only cannon portal in MLP, but if it doesn't work like said device it can be assumed it's not the same.
Also it was implied that Harry is pulling some strings to get Sweetie in at the School so we can assume exceptions were made to various laws.
Luna is doing a little too much.
Muhahaha. Couldn't happen to a better bigot. And yes, how appropriate that the wand of Luna is taking its revenge...
M-Moar?
Karma is slow but steady... and on ocassion contracts out
Ok, I just finished reading the whole thing: this is amazing and ilarious! I love it!
Only one thing I have to ask: Scorpius should be around the age of at least one of Harry's sons, if I recall correctly; since I doubt there is an army of genius level wizards around, where are they?
6232602 I didn't read that far, but even if that were the case a sentence mentioning it from say the wand maker would have made things a tad more believable. Like informing her that it is illegal and be careful, I dunno.
Ohhh brith of nightmare sweetie love it
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I was never really into the HP books, but one of the things that I remember liking was the whole, there's a lot going on in the BG you don't understand yet. Is it wrong that the author doesn't take cannon of both sides of the crossover into account, Yes. But I don't think you should let it ruin the fan fiction. I didn't like the fact that it was set x years after the books with the authors HP original charecters. But I'm not going to judge it solely how it's not like the original work. The question should be as a it's own work does it stand up? And I like it. Sure there could be more detail, but as long as there is real effort to improve I'm going to encourage that.
i never watched harry potter so why cant i stop to read this
Wow nice developement of the Lunar Wand there. Now I'm even more curious about it. Also great karmic nightmare can't wait for more
6232645 Luna actually wasn't involved in any of this. It was the Lunar Wand and Sweetie Belle.
6235274 D'uh, I forgot about the wand....
6232203 YAY! MORBID COMEDY!
THat gave me the willies though I must admit.
read the entire thing over the last 24 hours- and I can definitely say that your writing has improved steadily. and I can't wait to see what scorpius has coming! also, i dont know if someone else has asked, but are you planning on incorporating the kids of harry, ginny, ron, and hermione?
6238004 Not in the first year.
6238446 All art I've done for this fic:
https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=802426
https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=568467
https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=844482
https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=830754
https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=753990 (This is the missing pic)
Why do I get the feeling that Scorpius should feel very lucky that the Lunar Wand was not made during Nightmare Moon's existence?
Then he would have probably been put into a magicaly induced coma, forced to suffer through all the lives, unable to awaken when it was too much for his feeble little brain, sent to use the same room that Nevile's parents had had to use in St. Mungo's.
6243683 Who knows where or who he got the spell from. Maybe there's someone/somepony pulling strings behind the scene... Or Discord is screwing around interdimensionally for a little fun...
Or perhaps there is a 'Need it Want it' spell that already exists in the human world.
I may or may not reveal its source. *Starts singing the Trollololol song and dances off into the sunset*
6290870 Is the editing really THAT bad?
Ah, the little bugger got what was coming to him. Let's hope it sticks, or if not at least he gets even more punishment.
And yeah, I can't see his little blackmail and slavery charms just being overlooked if they come to light. Really hoping they can fix whatever he did to Zwei.
So... Uhhhh... Is this going to be updated soon?
See, this is the way to do a cliffhanger.
The key to writing an engaging story is to always leave it at a cliffhanger at the end of a chapter, but make it subtle and natural enough where readers just look forward to reading rather than feel cheated out of satisfaction. It's a fine balance. (That I'm not the best at following myself.)
Tantabus! Sweetie's connection with the wand's dream magic has decided to take on Scorpius by itself...
Ye rip what you sow.