You can make this a proper sequel by taking the six digit code in the url of the previous story, and put it in the story prequel box of this one. Then people who followed the last story should be told about this one in their feeds.
Yes and no. That comes from the previous story A Different Kind of Greed...
Even though Spike did sex up all the mares, not to mention Twilight getting a double dose of Spike , Spike orginally wanted to stay exclusive to Rarity because he though it would be in poor taste to actually declare his love for the fashionista and at the same time he pretty much cheated on Rarity already with the other mares. Rarity countered that with even though she's flattered and accepted his feelings, she gave him the opportunity to be in a open relationship, or long story short, Rarity may be Spike's main girl, but he can fool around with the other mares with little issue.
7175099 Okay, Reread. Spike is with Rarity officially. Whether or not he's still doing the other five remain to be seen. Apparently, Applejack found someone else. I guess will have to wait and see.
Okay, interesting start. I suspect Spike will make it to the castle next chapter and Spike will be sexing it up with the princesses. Maybe some of the castle staff?
7175003 This is probably 2 months late, but I think that we can see Fluttershy may be in a relationship with a Prince that is a Changeling-Pony hybrid. His name is Aldalricus, and his parents are Queen Chrysalis and King Sombra. That's from a related story in the same universe that this story is from (and you probably know that Flutter's not a virgin, thanks to Spike ) I forget the name of the story, but it's under the same author so you probably would see it in his stories... So right now we know that Spike and Rarity are in a relationship, and Flutters and Adalricus are in one too. It could also mean Pinkie's in a relationship with the other Changeling hybrid, Raul, Adalricus' right-hand man.
A fun start to things, nice little setup and display of some personalities. That all said, I noticed some grammatical errors, you might want to go through what you have posted so far with a proofreader, and maybe a program like Grammarly.
A sequel? Milfs?
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You can make this a proper sequel by taking the six digit code in the url of the previous story, and put it in the story prequel box of this one. Then people who followed the last story should be told about this one in their feeds.
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Ah good point. Thank you for reminding me.
I didn't get all the way through yet, but wasn't Spike already in a harem with the Mane Six?
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Yes and no. That comes from the previous story A Different Kind of Greed...
Even though Spike did sex up all the mares, not to mention Twilight getting a double dose of Spike , Spike orginally wanted to stay exclusive to Rarity because he though it would be in poor taste to actually declare his love for the fashionista and at the same time he pretty much cheated on Rarity already with the other mares. Rarity countered that with even though she's flattered and accepted his feelings, she gave him the opportunity to be in a open relationship, or long story short, Rarity may be Spike's main girl, but he can fool around with the other mares with little issue.
At least that's what I picked up from it.
Ugh, yet another story where Spike fucks Twilight Velvet and Cadence and adds both too his harem?
7175140 We do not know that yet.
WebHead69. You're a beautiful bastard and I love you.
7174735 I second this.
7175099 Okay, Reread. Spike is with Rarity officially. Whether or not he's still doing the other five remain to be seen. Apparently, Applejack found someone else. I guess will have to wait and see.
Okay, interesting start. I suspect Spike will make it to the castle next chapter and Spike will be sexing it up with the princesses. Maybe some of the castle staff?
It's a good start but I have to say the grammar is a bit off.
That cover art
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this is going to be a wild ride
Oh come oooon! Get to the juicy part where Celestia seduces Spike and bangs his brains out already!
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When do you think next chapter will arrive?
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Maybe tomorrow; Work has been crazy lately and my roommate is sick so I am helping him out as well.
Bonk!
nice cover art ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
7175003 This is probably 2 months late, but I think that we can see Fluttershy may be in a relationship with a Prince that is a Changeling-Pony hybrid. His name is Aldalricus, and his parents are Queen Chrysalis and King Sombra. That's from a related story in the same universe that this story is from (and you probably know that Flutter's not a virgin, thanks to Spike ) I forget the name of the story, but it's under the same author so you probably would see it in his stories... So right now we know that Spike and Rarity are in a relationship, and Flutters and Adalricus are in one too. It could also mean Pinkie's in a relationship with the other Changeling hybrid, Raul, Adalricus' right-hand man.
A fun start to things, nice little setup and display of some personalities. That all said, I noticed some grammatical errors, you might want to go through what you have posted so far with a proofreader, and maybe a program like Grammarly.