The Royal Vault in Canterlot has been sealed to all bar the Princesses and Royal Guard; it is home to some of Equestria’s most dangerous or valuable treasures, such as the remains of the Nightmare Moon incident.
Fate is a tricky mistress; especially so when magic is involved, and now only a short time after the ascension of Twilight Sparkle a new trouble rears its head in Canterlot Castle, right in the bosom of its most secure facility. It’ll prove to be a political nightmare for the Princesses, especially shortly after Twilight Sparkle’s inauguration.
We follow in the hoofsteps of this… new bundle of fun.
Chapters (4)
This is promising.
As always with your fics, this looks really interesting.
Huh, it certainly grabs you, and then leaves on a nasty little cliffhanger.
Its nice to see this story updating, thank you.
Interesting take on Trixie post-Twilicorn, a student in both magic and humility. That's one of the few ideas from the fandom that I wouldn't mind seeing in the show itself.
I like this so far.
Poor Coin. Now she has to cope with Buffoonblood's petty tantrums.
I love that she curses and swears by Currency, it's cute. I probably would have had her talk like Luna in the Nightmare Night episode all "thee's" and "thous'" but thats just an opinion (and considering that Nightmare Moon didnt use them in the premire probably a wrong one.) This sounds very interesting, I cant wait for more
I like that you seem to be bypassing the whole "She's the Nightmare she cant be trusted" thing with her as a blank slate. (Though bits to bagels Blueblood does something stupid and unfortunate in that regard.)
So.NMM degenrated and become bankeer? Horror intensified.
Interesting idea having Caramel being a farrier, and nice take on dream magic.
Well this story is an interesting take on NMM. I do agree with the whole Elements of Harmony not being able to kill as it would be something against what they seem to be meant to do. Granted there does seem to be a bit of conflict with the harmony of putting what is essentially a blank personality in an adult body.
This is a great story.
I can't wait to see more of Coin Counter. You really make Alicorn OC work.
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Blueblood will lose more than his shoes...
Very nice to see this updated, and ah, the idiocy rears its ugly head. Whelp, time to sit back and enjoy the fireworks.
Blueblood = Dumbf***
Good grief Bludeblood.. your really that much of a brat?
I say Blueblood's punishment should be to have ugly pig iron shoes nailed to his hooves publicly, while having his crimes and petty motivations listed for all to hear in whatever is Canterlot's Town Square with both common citizens and nobles present to observe his humiliation. Following the adding of the shoes, they would be enchanted so they could not be removed for the duration of whatever his sentence would be (possibly add a yoke for added emphasis/humiliation), a formal statement of the shoes' purpose posted in several major papers, and finally the removal of his honorific.
I'm not sure what ironic punishment should be given for Witty Scoop, but give me a few hours and I'll see what I can come up with.
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The punishment for Witty Scoop is that, while the media circus about Coin is going on, he's stuck down in a cell unable to do a damn thing.
Hope he has fun, huh?
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Yeah, that works.
Now this is how you do an alicorn OC.
Seriously, is Blueblood right?
How in the Baskin Robin's 31 flavors of hell did he get to where he is today? What next, is he going to challenge her to a duel out by the swing sets during recess?
I'm in favor of publically stripping his title, followed by a public gelding. Preferably by Luna, so she can demonstrate how such was done in 'the old days'.
update?
It must be the saddest thing to pair up two good people and have them produce an idiot.
Update?
Now, to wait for an update. *wink wink, nudge nudge*
The only thing I can say is I hope Blueblood ends up in a hole somewhere nobody will ever find him.
Blueblood is rapidly going to find himself falling down long stairwells.
In corridors where there are no stairs.
What can I say, it's a Hearths-Warming miracle.
Iin the middle of Summer?
Who am I to question the ways of the Hearths-Warming Spirit?
Truly, Blueblood could test the patience of a saint.
Also, this story has been an extremely enjoyable read, i hope i get to see more of it in the not too distant future.
update?
Update?
Update??
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We'll get there when we get there; I'm fighting off writer's block at the minute and have been for some time :/
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Every year, around now, I go through all the stories in my folders that haven't updated in awhile and write variations of, "Update?". In hopes of getting a reaction. Eventually if I do not get any sort of response after a certain amount of time, I chuck it into the cancelled folder.
Thank you for responding
Wouldn't be too strange if you did, considering that your entire "world" has been the inside of this vault
It's not for the faint of heart
......how does this guy still have a job?
I am happy that Celestia and Luna decided to accept Coin into the family immediately when they figured out her origin
Mr. Scoop what part of "You broke into the castle’s medical ward” did you not understand, you've committed a crime against the Royal family
And you're apparently a repeat offender
Wouldn't it be funny if it said:
"Yeah so, you know that guy Blueblood, yeah don't be like him... seriously don't.
And Prince Blueblood, if you're reading this, stop, just stop."