• Member Since 16th Jan, 2014
  • offline last seen Jan 31st, 2014

Kip Wilson


Just a dude with a story, nothing more.

Comments ( 13 )

What, no other chapters?

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You... want more of this?

Kind of meh as a standalone.

Seemed a bit rushed at the end, but follow-up chapters would be interesting, especially since Mac's known and trusted in the town...

Heyy, that was really good.

I demand moar!

I mean I could see more from this, but it was alright for what it was. :eeyup:

I kinda wish this was longer or had more chapters, but it was still pretty good. A little clunky at some parts early on but the tentacle scene made up for it. Nice work :twilightsmile:

Is that a Star Trek reference in your title?

I can't say I'm not jealous of Mac here.

an unusual setup for tentacles but I like it

Do unspeakable things to your body as I torture you while your life slowly slips away, unable to do anything to stop me.”

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