Stardust the Pegasus and a Zebra from stable 92, were nearly
killed during a slaver attack on their home. Stardust took
what they were looking for, but does not know what it is.
All they know is that they are in the wasteland now,
and it's not going to be easy trying to survive,
while making sure not to get their heads being separated
from their bodies.
Friendship is all they have left, and their only mission is
to keep their home safe, and to discover what to make of
the data they have collected... but they will soon have
another mission to take into their hooves.
Chapters (19)
ok,note to anyone commenting,if you are going to hate on this JUST because i forgot one bloody letter in a word,do not bother leaving a comment its just going to get deleted when i get home and i don't like acting mean
its a story,enjoy it if you think the story is good,don't hate it because a single word was missing a single letter in it
welp *sips my soda and burps* looks like that was awesome
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3809720 hehe awww thanks
huh, didnt expect doug to be the phantom stallion. but good! and the part where he hoards as he gets nervous was funny
3814118 SO MUCH FEEEEEELLLSSS am ah right? :3
this is just part one. im looking forward to part 2 and what ever lies in hoofington
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3830457 well that chapter just got published and don't excpect this to be the last you see of hoofington though,the second part may be short but hoofington will show its ugly face again later on
Title: Fallout Equestria: Digital Shadow
Stardust the Pegasus and a Zebra from stable 92, were nearly
killed during a slaver attack on their home. Stardust took
what they were looking for, but does not know what it is.
All they know is that they are in the wasteland now,
and it's not going to be easy trying to survive,
while making sure not to get their heads being separated
from their bodies.
Friendship is all they have left, and their only mission is
to keep their home safe, and to discover what to make of
the data they have collected... but they will soon have
another mission to take into their hooves.
There you go! A new improved version of both title and description, all ready to be used. You're welcome.
So this dosen't look like anything I'm going to read, but I was REALLY bored.
3848532 thanks,sorry it doesn't interest you though but hey im not doing this for attention im doing this becuse i bucking want to
so thanks for the improved description though
Good job
I know it ain't easy writing a FoE fic but don't worry just keep on trukin'.
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3948970 thank you and FINALLY someone who knows this isn't as easy as it looks,but i'v been told im getting better so THATS A PLUSE and thanks for the support
The problem is not that writing an FoE fic is hard (admittedly, it is, but no more than any other story), it's that you seem to have a poor grasp of the English language. Use spellcheck, find an editor who knows what they're doing. The main reason this has a 2:1 downvote-to-upvote ratio is that. You fix that, and people would actually give it a decent chance. It won't fix all your problems, but it will go a long way towards helping.
4366976 well if the spelling is the problem then spell check is fucking ruined because i do use it,it just doesn't seem to work,and im part persian even though im from america and i also did have a editor,but she vanished and never really did her job but that may be because she was actually doing the art for this which may not come by any time soon,so do you know any good Editors? because mine vanished -.-
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Looking for Editors
There are plenty of groups like this, mind you. Take a look around, see what you can find.
4366989 alright,i'll try looking when im not busy ether attempting to write this or when im not with friends role playing the day away