Twilight discovers a book by an unknown ancient scientist who studied and experimented on the first known alicorns under the direction of Discord.
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This was a very interesting story, and well told. There wasn't a very strong arc, but it remained interesting to read all the way through. You have a good grasp of pacing here. I almost wish it could have been a bit longer? Lots of good thoughts though.
My problem with this is that I quickly lost interest; and never regained it. It's simply too boring.