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Patient X
Defining "unneccessary" for a decade.
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Poor them. What a way to die.
Just a little note here: I think you said "fuck" enough times to where this is a bit beyond "teen". I counted 9 uses of "Fuck", 3 uses of "Shit" and 1 use of "Asshole", even the use of the word "bitch". That's 14 curses in a 3000 word period. With that accompanied with the "gore" I'd say it constitutes a mature rating.
Just my opinion though. This may be a bit too much to those who don't like mature stories.
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What's the bog deal?
337772
oh nevermind I get it
337792 It's a TwertCrew thing. I wouldn't have expected you to understand its origins.
337787 i think he tried to say big deal...typo?
337799 yes, I get it now
ohhh i see know
talking about alot of cursing in the story
337824 Ya...I think I need to change the rating a bit...
i still like the story
337843 Thanks a bunch!
i rate this
out of five smiles
That was awesome! All the swears don't bother me, I think it's really well written!
out of 5 
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337761 There are still some teens that these kind of stuff don't bother them :P
345736 I don't think it's a matter of whether or not it bothers them, more of whether or not it's appropriate for all within that age group, or at least the general consensus.
sad
but still
bucking awesome
1288511
I forgive you of your trespass.
Oh, and you spelled 'faggot' wrong. Oh, and the word 'Faggot', in it's original definition has nothing to do with the living. A 'faggot' is a 'bundle of sticks'. I suspect it became related to those whom practice homosexuality during the times in which people were burned at the stake given that 'faggot' is close to being plural given that it is speaking of a 'bundle' rather than a singular. Also, a 'fag', which is normally used for the (modern) singular term in several countries for a homosexual is incorrect as well, being that a 'pack of fags' is not a group of people, but rather a pack of cigarettes.
-Good day, old chap!
1290896 Thank you for silencing that troll. Have a "wub". *
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1298198
*Bows and accepts, Wub*
Haha way to make me bored of story. You obviously do not know how to make emotional connection between characters and are trying to compensate for something lacking irl. Can it be you dont have a gf and are trying to make your own little girl in fimfiction? Get a life.
3915836
You've got an extra b there at the end, buddy.
4157291 Thanks for having logic. I totally agree with you.
I supposed it would be in poor taste to add this to Vore or Ponies Eating Tasty Animals.