Twilight is an alicorn, and thus is immortal, her friends, however, are not immortal, and there come the fateful days, where she must say goodbye to each of them.
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Unoriginal
Don't expect anything but disappointment, I have a knack for breaking deadlines and stuff. I'm also English... if that means anything.
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It could use some work, overall my main issue was how quickly the events went by. Like from one area to another with great detail to such vague detail on some parts.
Now I know what people think of my stories sometimes when it comes to detail, overall though. I like this, I like it, just too quick, very quick like you had something bursting between your fingers but the urge to release something took over your creative side more and than you release this piece of literature.
It's good, but some refining would be splendid.
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Cheers for advice, will take another look over it.
more chapters to come, so hoping they will improve
Stop this shit. It's so damn sad.
It's sad and depressing, but it is a great story. Just a suggestion, sad stories don't always have to have a sad ending, the endings can be somewhat happy. What I think you should do is have two alternate endings, one where it is happy and one where its so damn sad you want to curl up in a corner and cry.
I love your writing.
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Hmmm, An alternate ending eh?
Well, that might be something for me to do. Maybe after I have finished all the chapters, I will write alternate endings for the chapters.
Cheers for the idea
I cried.
This is the most beautiful and sad story on this site.
Author, you have my respect for creating such a masterpiece.
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Thanks for that
I do try
PINKIE! WHY?
As always, you're writing is flawless, seamless, mistake-less, and beauti-ful.
I'm sad now though.
Nicely done!
Twilight is not immortal.
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I like to think that Alicorns are immortal, and can only die, or lose their immortality if they chose so.
I cried...
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Well its up to fandom to guess
I think that Twilight is not immortal since Meghan said she isn't then again she is alicorn thus immortality she must have.
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Yeh, I guess people have different views on it, but then again, everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
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Yep
But I have a feeling that Twilight will die together with her friend. Because Meghan said that she won't outlive her friend.....The key word is outlive
Ah, my feels. You've tugged them all the way out. Beautifully written as always. Just one little thing.
Saying "out throughout" seems a bit redundant.
Finally, after months.
rarity nu...
but you did a great job... nicely done
I'm crying, man, I'm crying
I be sad
why did I read this? it makes me remember when my Grandmother died...
aww!
Aww shi** I cant believe I ALMOST cried... Well that's the downside of being immortal.
The enemy of immortality is time... I guess.
God dammit..... Almost cried again.
I cant believe I cried....