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    After asking Twilight Sparkle out, Chrysalis waits patiently for the mare's answer. This is their night!  · Crystal Moose
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Chrysalis has kidnapped Celestia, so she has Twilight Sparkle right where she wants her!

And Celestia really doesn't want to hear about it.

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A bit of silliness that I wrote in about four hours, trying to get rid of a writers block.

Edited and Proofread by Level Dasher.

First Published
14th Jan 2014
Last Modified
14th Jan 2014
#1 · 171w, 4d ago · 51 · ·

And thus begins the awkward romance. You know you're going to have to continue this.

#2 · 171w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

Must have more!!!!!!!!! :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

#3 · 171w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

This is amazing:moustache:

#4 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3785512

I dunno if there really is more in this, I don't actually foresee any outcome where Chryssy and Twi would go out.

I will put it down as a *maybe*, but I have other fics to finish first. :raritywink:

#5 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

That was fun.

Yes, it would be great if there could be a continuation.

#6 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

Wait.....:rainbowlaugh:

#7 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

I dig it!

#8 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

Lolwut, this was Chrysalis' plan the whole time?! :rainbowlaugh:

Is this only since the failed Canterlot invasion, or what?

Also, are you using genuine interrobangs there? Because whatever symbol you have after Celestia and Twilight's exclamations isn't displaying properly on my phone. :facehoof:

#9 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3785905

Canterlot Wedding and the IDW comics. Didn't overly worry where it fits into canon.

And yeah, genuine interrobang, it doesn't show on my tablet either.

#10 · 171w, 4d ago · 10 · ·

Twilight.exe has stopped responding.  Processing error

#11 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3785564

A chapter where Twi humors Chrysalis with a super awkward date,  with running commentary from a peanut galley of princesses and her friends could be awesome!

And double kudos points for including comic events in this. :rainbowlaugh:

#13 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3785564 There's probably gonna be people who'll make their own sequels to this, and they'll likely cover every possible response...

#14 · 171w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

See Chrysalis, that wasn't so hard, now was it? I forsee the future romance being both awkard and adorable.

#15 · 171w, 4d ago · 5 · ·

DAT ENDING.

This was enjoyable.

Approved for Twilight's Library.

~Skeeter The Lurker

#16 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3785564 please please please continue this delicious foe-yay

#17 · 171w, 4d ago · 4 · ·

Huh. That could have gone worse. Oh well, it's time to do a pros and cons list.

Alright, Twilight! Here's a list of the pros dating, Queen Chrysalis!

:twilightoops: I guess it couldn't hurt. This is a story where logic seems to have taken a leap out the window anyway.

Pros:

Peace between the Changelings and the Ponies!

Someone that can fit all fetishes!

Immortal Lover!

Plus Chrysalis can cook a mighty fine pancake.

:twilightsheepish: Well those aren't so bad. What's the downside?

Cons:

Love drain will have you feeling tired a majority of the time

You'll come to be too tired to do stuff if not managed carefully

Chrysalis be cray

Conflict in the family with Shining and Cadence

:twilightoops: Those are pretty hefty. I wonder how it'll be-

END

#18 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3786166

hmm

Chrysalis be cray

at least she is obviously crazy which is better as the other immortals who just snap or worse are subtle crazy ^^

#19 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

That was fantastic, and I laughed a lot.

#20 · 171w, 4d ago · 9 · ·

So Cryssy likes being dominated by little purple alicorns?

And not everything has to be a lesson, Celestia.

#21 · 171w, 4d ago · · 3 ·

I can honestly say i have no idea what i just reed :rainbowhuh: But i think i like it, a bit confused by the sex tag but ok. :unsuresweetie:

I can't not give it a 9 or 8 so i'll give you a 5/10 :raritywink: (It has no meaning but i like giving out ratings :twilightsheepish:)

#22 · 171w, 4d ago · 5 · ·

Absurd enough to get an upvote. Nicely done!

Also, >>3786398 :

Twilight stomped out of the room, then stumbled down the stairs, landing in a tangle of ropes, pulleys and night-vision goggles.

There's your 'sex' tag. Ahhhhh..... goggles!

#23 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

Bravo! Simply stupendous especially that ending! :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Coronet the lesser deleted at 7:59pm on the 14th of January, 2014
#25 · 171w, 4d ago · · ·

Congrats on getting featured! :pinkiehappy: And gotta say, I liked this. Short and silly, enough to get a smile and a giggle out of me. :derpytongue2: Kinda sad that this is a one-shot, but hey, I can live with that. Thumb up from me!

#26 · 171w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

I want more of awkward Chrysalis D:

#27 · 171w, 4d ago · 8 · ·

Imwaiting for the follow up on this... twtwilights reaction. And the events thereafter.

#28 · 171w, 3d ago · 7 · ·

This is so ridiculous is has to be legit.  :twilightblush:

#29 · 171w, 3d ago · 7 · ·

It's always so hard to ask that girl of your dreams out for the first time.  

#30 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3786398

I was erring on the side of caution, I usually do.

>>3786636

Too few stories include events from the comics, so thanks, I aim to please.

They did nothing?

>>3785933

They did nothing?

Too few stories include events from the comics, so thanks, I aim to please.

>>3787025

I have ideas for a follow up, just playing around with them now, see if they will be as funny as this one. And glad you liked it, LD!

Edit: HAHA I AM AN IDIOT!

#31 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3786091

I totally did not see that the first time through. Thanks Skeets!

#32 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

bwahahahaha, freaking awesome

#33 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3788237

You're quite welcome!

~Skeeter The Lurker

#34 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

awwwww its like a mother scoldering her child, so cute! :pinkiehappy:

#35 · 171w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

What no reaction to her question? That's something you gotta avoid my friend, ending it too early without an actual ending.

Upsets quite a few people plus it's mostly irritating. :rainbowhuh:

#36 · 171w, 3d ago · 4 · 4 ·

Those fangs are kind of a turn off. They look... dangerous and, scary. :fluttershyouch::fluttershbad:

#37 · 171w, 3d ago · 5 · ·

>>3788581

Hah, someone has downvoted your comment. Either it is someone who loves Chryssy, or someone who has a teeth-fetish.

It could go either way on this site.

#38 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

I want need more

#39 · 171w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

>>3788608

:rainbowlaugh: Honestly I think it's the second one. Wouldn't surprise me at all.

#40 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:that was funny:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

#41 · 171w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

“Princess‽”

Wow, someone actually used a genuine interrobang that wasn't myself?  Shit man, you're the first i've seen.

Dat cliffhanger.  Normally i hate them, but this one was just so hilariously placed i can't ignore it..

#42 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

:twilightoops:  Twilight.exe has suffered a fatal error and must reboot.

And shame on you Celestia.  You could still have turned this into a Princess lesson; about how to deal with the inevitable obsessed stalkers she'll attract.

#43 · 171w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

The little dragon stopped to think. “Maybe Rarity could make you a turtleneck, Pinkie says you can’t go on a spy-mission without a turt—”

So when did Pinkie Pie start channeling Archer.

#44 · 171w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

>>3789379

A... tac-turtle... what ever!

I think Pinkie has been channelling archer ever since the Crystal Empire :raritywink: And I am so glad someone caught that.

#45 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

Gk... rbl... bwahahaha! :rainbowlaugh:

My only complaint is that this story isn't structured well for a sequel. This makes me sad.

Insta-faved!

#46 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3788581

Some mares are into that kind of thing. :duck:

#47 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

ok you have to continue this at least anouther chapteer where twilight agrees.. way to easily and throws Celestia for a loop.

#48 · 171w, 3d ago · 6 · ·

>>3788059

It's always so hard to ask that girl of your dreams out for the first time.

Totally! And then after you ask them out, your mother corners you as you get ready, so you've got to answer all these questions before you leave, saying things like "yes, mother, she's a shape-shifting bug pony. No, I said 'she.' Yes, it's a mare. Yes, that means I'm a fillyfooler." and then things just get awkward. :twilightoops:

#49 · 171w, 3d ago · · ·

This so needs a sequel/more chapters.

#50 · 171w, 3d ago · 3 · ·

>>3788608

Either it is someone who loves Chryssy, or someone who has a teeth-fetish.

It could go either way on this site.

You act like the two are mutually exclusive. :pinkiecrazy:

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