• Member Since 3rd Oct, 2013
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Pastel Pony


Just a girl doing her best to write semi-entertaining whatnots. I'm a female brony, not a pegasister ...Get it right.

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This story is a sequel to Hate you, Love you


Time has passed since her trip to Canterlot,
and at last Rarity is feeling more like herself again.

But when a chance encounter leads her to discover that there's more to the homophobia she witnessed in Canterlot, she must make the decision between continuing to hide,
or fighting for what she believes in.

But... can she admit to the world what she is?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 33 )

What is she? A cheater? A whore?:rainbowhuh:

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Read the original story and find out :twilightsmile:

You have a wonderful story playing out for you! But... is she a fillyfooler than? I still don't know what she is... :unsuresweetie:

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Yea, she's a fillyfooler, just hasn't told anyone :trollestia:

Very nice. I hope you continue this.

Great story so far. Their aren't really that many stories that paint Equestria as anything other than completely accepting of Homosexuality.
Plus it's got Rarity at the helm, and story with Rarity as the protagonist is A-Okay in my books.
I eagerly await the next chapter :twilightsmile:

I was thrilled to see a Sequel to Hate you, Love you! So far, it's living up to the original. I'm a coltcuddler myswlf, so I have a softtspot for prejudice storiss, but less so obes that act like soap boxes for the e authors opinions, i prefer personal stories like this <3

Out of curiosity, why the switch away from First Person?

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I originally started writing this as first person, but ended up switching after a lot of thought about the story. While I have a general idea, I'm not positive on the direction I want this story to go in. I have a feeling though that eventually there may be scenes where rarity isn't in the room, or I may need to access how another pony (such as Bon Bon, Lyra, or one of the mane six) is feeling at a certain moment, in a way that first-person observation wouldn't really work.
I still tend to see the story in my mind's eyes as first-person, and generally think of the words in the "I" sense (as I do with basically all my stories) before switching it to "Rarity".
Mostly, the change was just to give me more options, as I'm introducing a broader range of characters than in the original story, and even though Rarity is the focus, I want to convey other character's thoughts and emotions aside from her own. :twilightsmile:

Wait, wait, wait, she has a crush on Fleur right? :rainbowhuh:

3926679 Now I feel stupid. :rainbowderp: but I really just wanted to make sure! :rainbowlaugh:

Don't make this sad! Don't make this sad!

But yeah, consider me interested.

The way you write Rarity rocks my world. :yay:

Another great chapter.
Very much looking forward to the next.

Ooh, now I want Fleur to show up.

Also, good for Rarity to take action without too much drama.

Looking forward to seeing how this pans out.

Just finished reading this and the prequel.
I did feel very sympathetic for Lyra and Bon Bon.
I can't really say I got too into it though, but I still thought it was good. I couldn't find anything about it that really WOWed me. I did notice a few small typos that took me out of the flow such as "bight about to cry".

Please continue to write despite what I just said. :scootangel:

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Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you think of my story. :twilightsmile:
(and stories... I love receiving all your wonderfully detailed comments... just keep forgetting to respond and thank you. :derpyderp2:)

I"m sorry you didn't find anything in Right to Love that really impressed you. I admit, it is one of my more controversial stories, and I'm less experienced in writing romance, so I doubt it's my best work. :twilightoops:

...Would you be kind enough to let me know where that typo is? :facehoof:

Anywho, I hope you continue to enjoy my work, and perhaps when you have the time, come and take a read of this when it's a few more chapters ahead and see if it appeals to you anymore then... or not .
I'd love to know what you think! :raritywink:

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...come and take a read of this when it's a few more chapters ahead...

Will do.

Upon further reflection, I really think I may have been thinking too much to really let myself enjoy it. I kept thinking that in a world were "Friendship is Magic" and you have Princesses of Love and Friendship, something like same-sex couples wouldn't be much of a problem. Of course, logic isn't always logical.

Keep up the good writing

How'd I miss this updating?:rainbowderp: Great continuation. I liked the small inner turmoil in Rarity's head towards the end. Pacing was smooth and characterization was well executed. Overall, a good chapter. :pinkiesmile:

‘Fleur won’t like it.’
She stopped and smiled. “I know.”

Hmmm...seems like revenge is a bit of a motivational factor as well.:trixieshiftright:

Can't wait for the next one.:twilightsmile:

You go mare! Love is love

Any chance of this getting updated, ever?

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Sorry. :twilightblush: I don't get a lot of time to write, and when I do I have to give priority to my more popular stories that need updating, like To Be A Parent or Great and Powerful, cause more people are waiting on those new chapters.

However, that doesn't mean this story is dead. I'm doing my best to work the next couple updates into my schedule, and with school ending next week, I'm hopeful I'll be able to dedicate to this story the time it deserves. :twilightsmile:

4492684 I know that feeling. The time to write, not the prioritizing thing.

This is a pretty good story, I hope you can find the time to update it.

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Oh, trust me, I will...

I love writing kick-ass Rarity beyond words. :twilightblush:
I'm not gonna stop anytime soon.

Canterlot Passes Gay Marriage Ban.

Where's Celestia in all this?

Princess Celestia has refused comment on how she feels about the ban.

Oh. Fucking hell, step up your leadership game Celestia, stomp out this crap before it spreads too far.

It was, after all, created so that ponies may have a voice in government separate from their princess.

Everyone makes mistakes I guess.

Calling it now: AJ's gonna be a homophobe. She's usually the one to react poorly to situations like these in fics.

When will there be another chapter?

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