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Cytotoxin


I`m Russian, I`m female, I`m blunter then a bag of hammers and I write pony staff occassionally. That`s about it.

Comments ( 10 )

LOL! That was a cute and funny story! Sweet, short and to the point, and yet humorous! Might I suggest working on the formating a little bit, but either than that, keep up the great work! :pinkiesmile:

"After all, that was the whole point of having a library, after all." Someone call the Department of Redundancy Department.
But seriously, this was nice. It was short, funny, and played off of meme, all of which is points in your favor. One thing I noticed thought is that you never contracted the words "does" and "not" into "doesn't." This made certain bits of dialog clunky. Fix that please. I mean, if that's okay with you...:fluttershyouch:

Now you need one with a chicken:scootangel:

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I think Pinkie Pie had that one covered already.

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After all-after all... I left if there intentionally. It`s all that remains of silly idea of trying to showcase how Twilight can cycle out in her thinking. Eventually, I diked most of that, because it just looked weird and wasn`t particularly relevant or even entertaining.

335178 Oh, okay. Well thanks for clarifying, it makes a lot more sense now.

335178 I want a fan fiction where scootaloo goes to learn how to be random from pinkie pie and the first lesson would be nothing is as it seems then scootaloo became a chicken

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I`m afraid you`re on your own with this one.

I`ve tried to consider the scenario you offer, but so far, all that I can invent either ends in total flop or in cupcakes.

335324 How about she become orange chicken a cheighnese main course

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I`m sure you`ll figure something out.

I tried to refrain from using my dictionary, but I could not resist. Half of the reason for were due to the feeling of satisfaction gained from verrification.

*Opine added to mental word bank* :scootangel:

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