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PLEASE DO NOT GIVE AWAY ANY SPOILERS! I CAN NOT STRESS THIS OUT ENOUGH!

After a tragic accident causes one of Pinkie's parties to go horribly wrong, Soarin finally decides that it's time to confess his feelings to Rainbow Dash.

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Well that caught me off guard. :twilightoops:

So Sad...:fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry::applecry: But SO FREAKEN GOOD!!!!!

Possible sequel or continuation? :pinkiehappy:

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I haven't thought of a sequel, I might make one.

Good lord.

I just watched the new season of Sherlock, so I'm already on edge.

Right now I'm feeling angry at you because this is only one chapter long. Very interesting, I must say.

I just wish it was longer because, darn it, it was quite intriguing.

The only thing I don't like is that Pinkie was crazy. I wish it was something else like they were robbed or something. I don't like it when Pinkie is crazy.

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I. Just. I was so happy them bam. So sad. Just. :raritycry: but it's so good!

Gah!..buuuuuuuhhhh........huh? :pinkiegasp:

DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNN :pinkiegasp:

All things considered it was an ok story I suppose, Soarins feelings could have used a bit more monologue.

Mostly just wanted to say that you don't defibrillate a stab victim!

Comment posted by Equestrian Clock deleted Jan 15th, 2014

I.... He.... :raritycry: all of the feels!

What a :twistnerd:! It's so sad :fluttershbad: :fluttershyouch: :fluttershysad:

This is sooooooo good:pinkiehappy: You should really write a sequel.

that was fantastic! Well done

that came out of no where, I was reading it and then I could just about feel my heart stop on the last line, I had to read it twice to make sure! :fluttercry:

I want to know more:fluttershbad:

That....holy shit, that sent a chill up my spine.

Well done. Your kick to the feels was quite painful.

:ajsleepy:thT made me cry :fluttercry: so sad:raritycry:

OH MY GOD...This...just made my heart stop when I read the last paragraph to the end. :derpyderp2:

WOW that ending is not what i expected. this is a great story cant wait for the sequel. keep up the great work!

3894578 Why thank you! Always nice to hear nice comments :twilightsmile:

That was- I can't-- Holy Celestia. :pinkiegasp:

This is a lot to take in... so let me sum up my feelings:

Superawesomegreatfeelyomgomcwhat. :rainbowderp:

Aw shit..I wasn't expecting the plot twist. Damn. But I really enjoyed it!

That was awesome! I wasn't really taking much notice but then the plot twist right at the end, wow, really well hidden! :)

What a plot twist! I did not see that coming!

THAT WAS SO FREAKIN AMAZING!!!! :raritycry: :raritydespair:

WOW-WHAT-HUH!!!:rainbowderp::fluttercry::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad:
That was very unexpected.:derpyderp1:
Wait what happend with pinkamena.:pinkiesad2:
Anyways L-O-V-E-D it!!!:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

It's awesome story, but what happened in the end?

Comment posted by 2fab4u deleted Apr 1st, 2015

I hate it but yet I love it. By the way, nice name.

Well that was ONE WAY TO END A STORY
IM NOT SURE IF SOARIN DIED
I BET HE DID
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
THAT WAS GOOD

Wow! This is so confusing... but I REALLY love the open end!
Take your like good writer! :heart:

So was this all a dream?:pinkiecrazy:

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He died and became a ghost :applecry:

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