This story is a sequel to Dear Daddy
"Trust me, Dashie, you mean the world to me. You are the most determined, daring, loyal pony I have ever known. I know you will only amount to great things. I really am proud of you, truly."
Years after her father's passing, Rainbow Dash discovered a letter he had written long before he died. A letter of comfort, a letter of forgiveness...
A letter of love.
"You. You have managed to crush my feels. Twice. " -EpicNinjaGamer
"That was a nice heartwarmer! I liked it!" -jack_mahoff
" It's very well done. Rainbow Dash's characterization is amazing and realistic." -StageQuill
Cover art by: Me
I'm going to guess this is before Rainbow Dash meets Twilight, because otherwise it would be so much easier for her to "get her stuff back".
3777461 Yup.
That was a nice heartwarmer! I liked it!
and like that i fav this...great work
A real warmer.
....Crap.
You. You have managed to crush my feels. Twice.
Is it wrong that I laughed at this line?
or this one?
Anyway, for bringing yet more tears to my eyes:
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I have to say, I can not wait to see this story reviewed! I great follow up, with a wonderful message
{My feels}
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Grammar score out of 10 : 10
Pros
The story was very well written, well paced, and grammatically correct.
Notes Section
There really is very little I can say to improve this. It's very well done. Rainbow Dash's characterization is amazing and realistic.
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3818762 It is in no way related to My Little Dashie. It is, however, a sequel to my story Dear Daddy.
"I wish we could get your belongings and money back, I really do. But it's very hard to schedule a court session with Princess Celestia; it may take us years before we even get assigned a court date, let alone win it..."
Oh,then it's a good thing that she is Element of harmony.One of the few pony who has the right to meet Celestia and who know her personnaly.
Oh dude when Celestia will know what you did to one of her most beloved subject your flank is gonna take a lot.