A Fortunate Brony finds himself in Equestria and he gets the chance to meet Celestia and Luna. But things are not as they seem. It is only through catastrophe that we realize how limited our time is with the ones we love.
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hey there. just posting stories. Please comment or favorite. it helps my self esteem, that is, if its okay with you.
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I Demand you to make another.
Dude ...amazing!
Thank You! First Commenters are always the most appreciated!
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Anyone else feel free to leave a comment and (good) rating please!javascript:smilie('
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Heh heh. noramaly i would oblige, but i already put off college applications with this. maybe if i get more comments and views ill make another...
I must say, very well done. sir!
Never before have I wanted to kill half of the ponies of Equestria, but hey - that's what happens when you mess with Luna...
love it
It doesn't work.
Celestia is an all-powerful Sun Goddess, remember.
You wrote her as some weak-willed mortal pony would act now.
Celestia would not let the ponies of Equestria treat Luna that way anymore.
She would go all Daymare Sun on their asses and burn them with her fire.
And don't foget she is their Princess.
Yes their Princess, who they are disobeying.
Otherwords, committing treason.
Which if one commits treason against their Princess, then the Princess has the right to put them to death for their obvious crime.
She could simply focus the sun beam.
And have it burn the ground away.
Nice trench of molten lava ahead now.
Should stop anypony from advancing on them.
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Why U Rate Hatin' on my story?
MAKE MORE!!
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I'm also writing a story that you can track. It's called The Heart of An Apple, which isn't done yet.
However, this story I am done with. I tried thinking of where else i could go with it, but at the same time, in retrospect, this wasn't that great a story in my opinion. So i just decided to leave it be.
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As ruler of all ponies celestia has a duty to here the words of her people and act accordingly. If she was to go against them then they would see her as a dictator and lose them. She cannot attack or hurt them for her love for them would not allow that.
So in order to save her subjects from themselves and their rage she had to do the one thing she would never want to do and lose her sister again. At least that is the way I see it.
Shouldn't really be calling it Chapter 1 if it's not going to continue.
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Bah, THIS story? I've left this horrible first attempt of a fic to rot long ago. I was just too lazy to name it.
Honestly, I regret writting this story and leaving it up here. Maybe i should either take it down or rearrange the description to say, "this is my first story and therfore, shit. Dont waste your time."