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captainmidwing


just a pony from NLR

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This is the story of the hero of ponyvile not as much as the elements but a regular hero but hes got more than that to worry about such as hiding what he is really doing and what he plans to do he has no father that is in the sense of the word physical but he has one an almighty god who created him to save a long dead empire that needs to come back to face the evil that has slept well since before Luna's and Celestias mother


(I do not own art is temporary till my own is done.)

This is a group project being written by 4 writers and no editors so if your an editor by all means pm me each page was written by a different person.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

ever heard of commas?
they're quite useful.

I'm not going to like or dislike this story, since I couldn't get past the first paragraph because of the lack of commas (and other grammatical errors). you need an editor.

Comment posted by La Barata deleted Jan 12th, 2014

does not bother me I'm actually waiting to find out if some one will be my editor the story was written on word and is also still being rewritten and corrected by a group of people. so basically monkeys and type writers

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