It all started out as a silly idea; trying out to be a Pony. One thing leading to the other. I apparently went all the way. Now, I had to live with it, there is no way out.
You start with trying out the gloves and stockings. Or you try the panties and top first. Or you could try out any other combination. Eventually you have them all on. This is the fun part.
Only now I had tried the muzzle on, and it is when the changes stick. I had made it fuse to my face. Now I can't get it off.
This is where the adventure began, as they say. Only a Pony can't live alone, thus I'm happy, not being forced to this consideration in the first place.
Chapters (18)
3773346 is there anything in particular, specific details, or just in general, longer chapters?
3773399 I have managed to build up a bit of a scene, and develope the mood a bit, I guess it is time to get the story into a higher gear.
A story has to have more then just the scene, even if the mood is just right.
Certain parts had to be put into place now, and can be used for back ground refferences. Everyone will see mainly the same, but act in their own way, on what they found.
Fore a side note, this is what it looks like, just using spell check.
3773466 Thanks, and I hope you'll enjoy it as much as I had intended to.
I just need to slip in the next character in the morning, her morning, that is ..
This is by far the longest chapter, but on the other hoof, I just introduced Flutter into the story here too.
3773466 Since you liked the chapter longer then the initial once, I hope you enjoy, what I slipped in there.
This would be the first sign of what's coming up.
It's incidentally the longest chapter yet.
3791129 thanks for the heads up, better hear it from you, then most others who may have noticed it, sooner or later.
Now, the problem is fixed.
I hope you enjoyed the little scene of exploring her, in her new situation and role.
oh so you do have more fics of my interest then eh?....
although the description confuses me greatly.....
5083833 From the groups' listing on your page, it is likely.
I have some 50 stories currently on the site, so if you enjoy the first you encountered, it is very likely you enjoy the next story of mine.
I try to come up with a new idea for each story, so they are most likely promising a new experience each time.
5084322 cool stuff , funny though how after all this conversing you've done with me i haven't really seen any of the broken english grammar that's so present in the first fic of yours that i read , you actually seem to be conversing a lot like i do which i thought would have been impossible up to this point , i wonder why that is.....
5084403 Part of it would be in how I try to express o much more in the story, then I usually do when I am chatting, I guess.
There is a chance that some of the problems in the stories are from where I leave them, as my Muse abandon the story.
Could ofcause be in the border between what I can filter out and what I miss?
Oh well, I have been chatting for numerous years
your muse does what now? what's a 'muse'?...
as have i....
5084830 hmm
Muse as in inspiration, what drives you to write a story or draw an image or any similiar artistic endevours.
If I read this right, rather then left, you have been around on chat for a good while, then?
I used to be on egroups and onegroup before Yahoo bought it all up. it was quite alot of fun, from time to time.
5084990 i see , another first...
well i've only stuck to stuff like this , i don't do forums.....
5085172 There was no forum back then, as far as I recall, you could send E-mails to the groups. There was a Chat for each Group originally.
5086582 oh i see , you're talking way old school , lol im to young for that.....
5086979 I guess it is "Old School", yeah, I survived the millenia ..
ok , what the fuck is going on in this story? cause i couldn't tell for shit.....
5088738 What happenes?
Setting up the scene for the first/original pet, then we follow Diamond Tiar.
After that we have a reaction to what hapenes to her, before going back to see more of her new life.
Hope this made sense, without setting off any Spoiler-Alerts.
5090580 mmk , so who's human at what point where? and then there's anthro and pony involved as well? couldn't tell anything with that either.....
5091498 the new arrivcals where human.
DT and friends would be the Ponies.
5092243 right , that still leaves everything up in the air for explanation as far as i can see then....
5092667 You did read the chapter where Diamond was introduced to her new life?
This scene is supposed to explain much of the general sittuation for the entire story.
5099917 i did , but then i wasn't sure who was human where with what and if we had moved on to another character and where did the main character go?....
5100537 maybe a few details would be clearer, if you read it knowing they were entering as humans, while turning anthro fairly early on?
I thought it felt logical and clear while I wrote it, but it was my story so I my have been biased on the point?
If you do read it again, with the details explained, let me know how it came out?
5100738 we'll see....
5102298 Yeah, I guess we will.
I just published the latest chapter of the story.
3773346 Sorry most of the chapters are as short as they are.
The latest is at least 1,000 words.
A few chapters are longer than this one, but it is stil longer than most of them.
Just curious, how long chapters would you prefer?
With some help, maybe I could improve the story further.
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