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Alien Bronco


Yea i read fics and stuff so i write some to and there good so read them and stuff.

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Vinyl Scratch lives to feel free! She feels trapped in society and the bland routine of every day life. She discovers that graffiti art gives her the same sense of freedom and danger that her music does. With a troubled past she longs for this feeling, doing almost anything in her power to grasp it. Even tough the activity is considered illegal she still finds herself in the streets every night after dark, tagging long abandoned buildings, feeling like she's leaving her mark for everypony to see. After deciding to try and tag one of the biggest buildings in Canterlot she gets caught again, this time facing severe punishment.

But when she discovers who the pony that lives in the building she painted is, she concocts a devious plan to get herself out of the trouble shes in.

She's willing to try anything to get back out on the streets!

Authors notes: Light comedy, nothing to cause any ROFLing. This is my first official fic and I really hope you enjoy! I am looking for someone to edit for me and would be very grateful to whoever wants to help! That being said if you have any tips for me and my story please comment or message me with them! I'm not new to writing but i'm new to writing in this setting so I would love a bit of feedback. Now read my story you silly fillies!

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 62 )

Seems to pull heavily from Exit Through Canterlot.

3777959 Oh, wow i didn't even know that story existed :facehoof:, thanks for telling me man... Don't worry i think i'm going in a different direction from that fic. I don't expect this one to get many views anyway. It's more of a practice fic for me. :twilightsmile:

<(Bronco)>

3777999 It's been going for a while. Guess the idea of Octavia being a vandal is pretty popular :derpyderp1:
Still though, there are clear differences between your story and ETC, but it's the underlying theme of Octavia going around spraypainting things that made me connect the two. Gonna keep one of my eyes on this'n, seems like it'll be interesting :pinkiehappy:

3778018 Thanks that means a lot! The next chapter will be much longer and more well written! I got a few tips from a very helpful psp master that i think will help the story. :pinkiehappy:

<(Bronco)>

3778037 Don't mention it! And gonna look forward to it, see where this story goes. Even practice fics can turn into works of art :twilightsmile:

Loving this story so far. In terms of writing this is so much better than the last chapter.
Keep it up you can only get better from here :twilightsmile:.

3803636 Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it. :twilightsmile:

<(Bronco)>

Go on...
Pretty good for your first fic...
I know mine sucked.

I'm liking this story :heart:

3857626 Thanks! I'm really glad your enjoying it.

<(Bronco)>

HOLY SHIT!:pinkiegasp:
s-shes dead:ajsleepy:....jk:rainbowwild:
OMG this just keeps getting better and better!:raritystarry:
what will happen next?:raritydespair:
I know how I would find out!:ajsmug:
WRITER I NEED MOAR NOOOOOOWWWWW!!!:twilightangry2:
please!:scootangel:
(god this is the longest comment I ever written)

Ok, which one of you called the mugger on GTA and mugged Octavia.:trixieshiftright:

3898542 Glad you're enjoying! I wasn't sure where i was going with this one, glad to see it turned out well!

Want moar? Alright i got you! Ill get this next one out twice as fast!

<(Bronco)>

Thanks for the shout out keep the up the great work.

3901982 No problem thank you for the Favorite! It's what keeps me writing! :pinkiehappy:

<(Bronco)>

I HATE THE WAIT FOR THE NEXT BADASS CHAPTER!!!

This is an awesome story :) Cant wait for the next chapter ^---^

Just a quick update!
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I will have the next part of the chapter out today or tomorrow. Turns out it is a lot longer than i initially expected. It will be around 3000 words...

Otherwise thanks for the support guys!

Btw this next one is by far my favorite chapter!

<(Bronco)>

Loved the GTVS reference

3928172 You got one of them! Only two more to go for a prize :pinkiehappy:. Recently the author of that story Favorited Tagged so In my excitement i wrote in that part thinking why not? :scootangel:

<(Bronco)>

Well, someone's shouting out at me apparently, so I'll voice my presence :derpytongue2:

Anyway, good update and story so far:raritywink: I'm a might curious about what's going to happen next.:twilightsmile:

One last thing though :

then right after it gets really good i could just… stop the story all together?

Just to point out that GTVS isn't done, merely on a break, but for that remark, its next update is delayed even further :pinkiecrazy::trollestia:

All jokes aside, keep going! it's a good plot line you have there

3929357 Thanks! And i know the stories continuing i was just saying where the first arc ended left the story on a peak rather than at a transitional point in the story where arcs normally take place. Unless you can transition off of the point your at in which case you've entered god mode. (Insert bad over 9000 joke here). I shouldn't question your ability though, dat apple scratch!

<(Bronco)>

Private Dangle approves this story.

3933721 Well thank you :fluttercry: I have always wanted the approval of someone like you... It just means so much to me!

New chapter out soon! I got some time to write and i finished planning out the story so now its time to work on the chapters! I have kind of just been writing whatever comes to mind :twilightsheepish:

Anyway be sure to leave me feedback on the story (Negative or positive) so i can improve for my next story. Hint: I'm planning this next story to be at least 100,000 in length! :pinkiehappy: Be ready for that!

<(Bronco)>

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO My first dislike!!!!

You know what, i don't really mind all that much! I would appreciate if he would tell me what he/she dislikes about my fic but what can you do right? :pinkiehappy:

<(Bronco)>

3993694
Or worst, just 24 thumbs up, that should be illegal or something... :rainbowderp:
I shall remedy that. :scootangel: But the price will be high, you must write more!
UNDERSTOOD?

More story dammit! Lol but seriously keep up the good work man.

3994603 i will try my bestest! Twilight shut in mode ACTIVATE!!!


3994867 Will do. I love comments like these, they keep a writer going!

Did you just call my filly

*me a*

don’t worry bout my kay?

*me*

Yea were out

*Yeah*
There are a lot of non-capitalized i's in the middle of sentences.
(For the chapter title)
*pieces*

4081913 Whoops :facehoof:

I got so used to Microsoft word automatically capitalizing my I's. But after my hard drive crashed I starting writing on Google Docs... They don't really help you out as much as word.

Thanks a lot for telling me. I'm really sad at the reaction to this chapter so far. No new likes... 1 dislike... I didn't think it was that bad! :ajsleepy:

<(Bronco)>

4082644
Don't be sad!:pinkiesad2:

I really enjoyed this chapter and I didn't think it was bad at all.

Please keep going with this story.:twilightsmile:

This story is awesome, has some great vibes! :pinkiehappy: I can't wait for more, write on! It is one of those stories that I don't take notice to mistakes on because I am captivated by the story itself. So good job on that! So now I shall peacefully wait for more. :scootangel:

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But seriously keep them coming this is great stuff.

4124228 Thanks for your Comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment comment :pinkiehappy:

<(Bronco)>

Plot twist! Vinyl is actually mentally insane and everything that has happened to her she imagined because shes coo-coo crazy. Lol jk, could you imagine a story like that? Pshhhhhhhhhhhh!

Yeah, sure... And in that fic surely Vinyl rapes a filly. Right... You tease. :scootangel:

4124453 I have no idea what you're going on about. :twilightblush:

Crazy people, am I right?

<(Bronco)>

Lol jk, could you imagine a story like that? Pshhhhhhhhhhhh!

I..äh...yeah! Totally hilarious....excuse me while I need to.....get rid of something....:scootangel:
I do what I can to help! Guess I should thank you for giving me a chance! :pinkiehappy:

The story sounds very good so far, but cover art, character tags, and description mean a lot to me. I dislike this shipment. That's why I disliked and wrote why. :ajbemused:

I am really enjoying this story so fare, I like how Vinyl is both this sad pony, and her odd and wacky self. But the start of this made them out to be much younger then they are.

Please keep up the fantastic work!

Will Daddy Blublood show up to make waves?

I love it when they twine their tails as a loving act! Therefore I love your story. :scootangel:

4234403 You love my story, therefore I love you! :twilightsmile:

<(Bronco)>

This story is really under appreciated. Anyway great chapter, I look forward to seeing more.:twilightsmile:

4237132 It's comments like this that keep me writing. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

You know what? I'll go knock a few pages out for you.

<(Bronco)>

Thats it octavia no more leaving vinyl... if thats ok i mean

Was that a bridges reference i saw or am i just over thinking it

4263693 I have references all over the place people didnt pick up on yet so… probably!

<(Bronco)>

A rather enjoyable story, just different enough from the others that it keeps me reading. While I would like to say that I hope to see a new chapter soon, I don't like to rush things so take time.

Vinyl is actually mentally insane and everything that has happened to her she imagined because shes coo-coo crazy.

I take it that is a reference to Bridges by psp7master? Of course it is. But don't make her imagine judges in her head that make an imaginary court trial and an imaginary prosecutor who shoots imaginary ponies on an imaginary bus or in an imaginary court while shouting DEATH PENALTY!, okay? Loving the story so far btw.

This chapter. I like it. ANOTHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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