• Member Since 16th Dec, 2011
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i like mlp


Ponies have been disapearing, only to show up, tortured to death by mysterious mare known as "The Hare"... At least thats the rumor. Berry Punch never really believed in rumors, that is to say, until she wakes up in a strange place... Will she beat The Hares game and save the others, or will she die trying? Read and find out!!

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 16 )

Never try to make a suit out of Berry punch.
I tried once but it just stank of alcohol, vomit, tears and shame.
Good day.:moustache:

make the secound chapter i wanna see what happens to berry punch :fluttershysad:

You win an internet for that comment.

This sounds like it could be a fun ride.
For us readers, I mean.

First things first is that I'm first.
Secondly, YEESSS! I've been waiting for this to update, and I wasn't dissapointed.
Lastly, I am ashamed to admit that I didn't get the reference.:fluttercry:


well it was towards the end. it would be easier to see if you picture the saddlebag as a fedora.

Ah~ You and your awesome stories~
So you did use that whole lowering ceiling thing. Ah <3

I am but a god, that uses pain, horrer, and betrail as my wepon to be the other mind behind the text you read in this... work of art, del is the artist, but I am the one in the dark corner wispering the words of death filled machines into his mind, making his hand move in the way of sweet bloodfiled writing.... :heart:


indeed, yet everyone admires the darker forms of art to some extent.

Was the referrence... Indiana Jones of some sort?:rainbowderp: (Nice story, btw:pinkiehappy: Can't wait for more updates!)


yes!! finaly someone gets it!!:pinkiehappy:

YAY!:yay: I was hoping that was it, but I thought yu might have wanted me to point out the little reference to SAW in the beginning? I've never seen the movies, but from the parodies I've seen and what I've read about it, it starts out with the whole video and "let's play a game" thing:derpytongue2:


its more inspired by hostile than saw but the traps i make are going to be original and the killer is the last one you would expect.

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