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It is the dawn of the Classical Era of Equestria. An aging Clover the Clever bids farewell to her old mentor; Starswirl the Beaded, the greatest spell-caster of the Pre-Classical Era, quietly dead after a long and tumultuous life. Yet, he has left his student something that could upset he scales of balance in the fledgling Equestrian Republic. The Senate, convinced of the righteousness of their Universal Republic and proud of their acomplishments like creating an universal language and currency, are eager to end their tribute to the fickle dragonequus ruling the land from afar. But they need a weapon. A weapon believed once possessed by Starswirl the Bearded.

Clover must discover what Starswirl kept secret all these years. This is his story; a story of a world before Equestria, a dangerous and violent world where the seeds of all the millennia of history to come are planted. A world without alicorn princesses. Or?

This is the first (and probably last for a while, as the author is going to try to get a book published) independent story of the Origin of Harmony series exploring the prehistory of the Princesses and Equestria in general. The story was originally intended to be released in May, but the auhr got severe tendonitis and could not finish the last few pages' till now. To his surprise, he only had to change five lines to account for Season 4. He also apologizes for the vast amount of OCs necessary to maintain character diversity.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 3 )

Guys, I would appreciate if those of you would like this would share it with others by way of recommendation. I have a personal goal of beating Hard Reset II: Reset Harder (because it has the toolbaggiest title on this side of Jersey Shore, not because I didn't like it) in view count on a story, which is currently a couple hundred. Other than, like, dislike or complain as of your heart's desire.

Oh, and as I think I said in the commentary, just write a comment if the plot confuses you. I'll check in every now and then.

PS: Hi, Icewhip!

Cool story!! I'm guessing the Rocks of Ponytthia are the Elements of Harmony. This story for the win

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Eeyup! I'll write a short followup story explaining how the Pri-
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Anyway, glad you liked it. This first story in the series deals with the Elements, the second will be Celestia's POW on her rise to power, the third Luna's POW on her fall, the third a short story about a couple of ponies supporting Nightmare Moon in flashbacks and young Granny Smith, the fourth about Twilight's parents and finally the series will conclude with a huge three-parter set in the present day and human world. I plan to release two or three per season. #2 I will try to finish within a couple months.

And, as you might have guessed, both Xantippe and Dahlia will return at a later point in the series, hence their inclusion into this story. This was not intended as part of the series at all, actually, but I got the inspiration for it listening to some music. As soon as I started writing, I realized I could incorporate it as a prequel of sorts.

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