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Brony_Fife
A simple writer with complicated taste.
Brony_Fife
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Not bad.
I thought this was very well done.
Clop or otherwise, you are very talented and I enjoyed this.
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Thanks! Is there anything I could do to improve my writing? I'm sure there's some advice you could give...
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To be honest. I can't find anything really wrong with this^^
I think the thumbs down are just stemming from those who don't enjoy the plus size ladies! XD
but seriously, I think you did a great job.
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If that's their reason, then maybe they should READ THE DESCRIPTION.
Do you Really plan for I gender swap three some if it was half as interesting as this it would be worth a read.
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Very true. To be honest I kind of get it. Because even when I see a gore fic involving my favorite character, curiosity gets the better of me even though I know I won't enjoy it. The only difference, I keep my thumbs down to myself if I hate it for stupid reasons. Your right. There is no excuse for hating something just because you are not comfortable with it.
But don't let that get you down. You are very talented and no amount of pointless dislikes should hold you back from writing what you love my friend^^
Speaking of which, Big Macintosh is my favorite character and I love the way you portray him with his blessed namesake, as well as his very particular kink. I get the feeling he isn't too preferable to those twig sized girls either! XD
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No, it's a throwaway joke. It's rare for me to write clopfics, since they never seem to do as well as my other stuff, nor are they to the level of, say, Chuckfinley or Bronystories' clops.
But now that you bring it up, MAYBE it might happen. That's a very big maybe.
Well
..that...
actually really good
. Chubbies aren't really my thing but i got to say. No matter the subject
, You always provide A class writing 
.
Also I got no problems with clop fics. Heck I got a few in my faves
Of course I'v read more of them then I probably should of
.
Just a question though. What made you decide to use this trio for a night "fun"?
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This is hardly my best writing. It's what happens when I rush everything over a matter of hours long past my bedtime, and it shows.
I used these three only because I thought it might be fun. In fact I don't think I've ever had the chance to write Cheerilee. So there's that. Well, that and the chub fetish.
3753086 It's still better then a lot of clop on this site so beat your self up so much. Even at you'r worst you still have great ways of making a details. So just take the complement.
Trust me as a guy with a low self-esteem I have been getting use to getting complements and followers on tumblr as part of an RP I been involved in. And they been looking thought my Gmod stuff on tumblr. And sent a W.I.P image I'v been doing to a rainbow factory fan animation blog. And they rebloged it saying it looked awesome. Personally I think it need more work but knowing that people are enjoying something I made gives me this great feeling that I want to enjoy more of.
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Compliment taken. Thanks for enjoying the story. I've written some weird shit but this took the cake. Well, this and that one story where Twilight Sparkle accidentally brings her plot to life. That one was wacky.
Hmmm, yes, indeed, quite.
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Because I read your shit, which means I know what a good fat fetish fic should look like. Doesn't mean I enjoy it particularly, but I know what to look for.
I just think to my self, WMPF: Would MegaPone Fap?
... I found this due to a dare... Thanks for the easiest dare of my life!
In case your curious
Dare: read the first Cheerily fic under complete, sex, mature, and +1 if its twi related.
Edit: All I have to say is this, WHERE IS THE DAMN BRAIN BLEACH?!
But in all seriousness, great read (but I'm surprisingly daaawing more then turned on... Most odd mature/sex dare of my life thus far... OK second oddest... There was that one with berry punch and the spider with pony vag being in the mouth and pony's cuming rainbows... Next Please!!!)
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You were d'awwwing? Really?
What parts about it did you enjoy most?
Twilights timidness yet outstanding book knowledge, I found it very in character yet it made me laugh due to how she throw it out the window after they got done double teaming her.
I had to stop reading for 3 minutes to laugh after finding out about big macs pudgy fetish and how twilight set the spell up to work. Then there was the part where cheerily tackled twilight while she was big and twilight made herself grow even bigger.
In short I was laughing and daawing so much I couldn't get horny for the life of me. I was surprised there wasn't a comedy tag.
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I... don't know what to say to that, actually.
Part of me feels like I screwed up. Again. 
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Screwed up? Not likely, I was just in a happy mood and found it funny. You did a great job, I bet if a special somepony hadn't been up to something earlier this would of had a different effect.
Never think down about your own work. That leads to self doubt and crappy storys and shorts in the future. (I on the other hoof could of worded this last sentence better cause it sounds like a bad pun)
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You didn't like the first half? I guess it was a little confusing to jump around like that, going from Mac to Twi to Cheerilee to Mac to Cheerilee to Twi to Mac. But you're right, this got confusing. Well, a little. I still think Big Mac and Cheerilee double-teaming Twilight was a rather vivid image.
And yeah, I guess I got lost in myself when the mental image of Big Mac fucking Cheerilee to fatten her up (Which to date is the strangest thing I've ever written period) and just never got out until I wrote the ending.
All in all, this was fun to write, if a bit embarrassing.
I'm glad you liked it.
I would've liked some more build up to the sex. We're just kind of thrust into the sex (pun not intended). I wanted to see Big Mac and Cheerilee ask Twilight Sparkle to join them. I realize that this information is conveyed via memory, but it's not as impactful as watching events play out in a linear fashion.
You say that so matter-of-factly. As though Cheerilee was merely sticking an electric plug into a socket. A little more flowerly language couldn't hurt. ie, "Twilight Sparkle's vaginal veil parted to welcome Big Mac's erect explorer."
I must commend you on your choice of fetish. It's severely underrepresented on this site.
Money shots are to clop what explosions are to action movies. When well done, it's a thing of beauty. I was extremely please with how you handled Big Mac's release.
Overall, kudos to this clever clop! I highly encourage you to pursue more explicit writing in the future.
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That was originally in the plan, but I got bored with it and decided to just skip to the sex while leaving the implications of how they got there in the story description and a few throwaway lines.
Using beige when purple is needed. :/
Don't I know it! Chubby girls FTW!
Thanks. I honestly felt that was probably the best part of the story... next to "Cheerilee becomes a fuck-balloon" and Cheerilee sitting on Twilight only for Twi to turn the tables. But hey.
I have some other ideas, but we might not be seeing them for a while. Thanks for the kind words and constructive critique!
Sequel with gender swap (and female mac weight gain) Please!!!
This is awesomely well-written and desperately needs a sequel.
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Not so sure a sequel is all that necessary, honestly. I feel I've said everything I needed to say regarding the topic of magical chubbiness and its relation to pony smex. Might be more clop on the way, but I'm probably not visiting this fetish again for a while.
If you wanna thumb through some of my other, non-clop works between then and now, go ahead and do so! I'd love to hear your thoughts on my writing.
Hot
Omfg.....amaze balls.
This is the best clopfic fat pony fanfic, wish there was more
it was so good! Anyway, amazing job!
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I'm thinking of other ways to incorporate my fat fetish into clopfic form. I have some ideas, but they're not coming for a long time.
In the meantime, help yourself to everything else I've written.
4663771 Awesome! And yes I have liked much of your other work, yet this has been my favorite by far
im sorry but the mental images associated with this is to much all i picture in my head is two beach balls one pink one purple rubbing against each other that is all i see
You're fatter.
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NO YOU
Great story