• Member Since 7th Jan, 2014
  • offline last seen Feb 20th, 2014

elementofknowledge


I am awesome. That is all.

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Coco Pommel is a young mare who dreams of one day making a career in the great city of Manehattan. She writes all her wishes in her diary and waits for the day she can finally move to that wonderful city. But Manehattan is a big place, and it's easy to lose yourself.

My entry for the Rarity Takes Manehattan Equestria Daily Contest

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 2 )

Felt a tad, eh at the end for some reason, but you earned your like for your clever writing in the begging by purposely making it bad.

This is very good. The entries seem a bit spaced and a lot is left up the imagination. What you did is, in my opinion, an accurate portrayal of the conflict portrayed in the episode and a nice back story to the character.

I'm surprised that this story isn't more popular considering how much Coco has exploded in popularity.

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