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TheBobulator


I've heard that I write a pretty good story named Fallout: Equestria - Memories.

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This story is a prequel to Fallout: Equestria - Memories


Inquisitors, agents of the Circle of Steel, uphold the integrity of the Codex. Any Steel Ranger that fails to abide by the Codex or has renounced it will suffer fatal consequences. When words of dissent and treachery reach the ears of Inquisitor Souffle, he departs to silence the renegades that dare oppose the Codex and threaten to destroy what the Steel Rangers stand for.

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Good job Bob:pinkiehappy:

Have a like and a fave

The god empress Applejack's finest at their best.

Souffle? More like shitbag.:ajbemused:

Surprised that Frosty didn't put a bullet through him when she had the chance now that we've seen more of him. :facehoof:

I approve of this. :pinkiehappy:

Kindly,
~Sinrar

This is something that I can get behind

So, I finally caught up on the rewrite of Memories and then came to read this.

I like the additional characterization of Souffle, additional story behind the water talisman issues from the start of Memories, and more. The text itself is well done.

No particular criticism of the story itself, but on a more nitpicky level, I should mention that AU tag is already covered under Crossover (though I suppose it applies if this is an AU to the primary FoE universe), and Adventure doesn't seem quite applicable to this piece (debateable). I'm not sure "comedy" applies, as the story has a very serious tone; the presence of some comic relief doesn't make the story a comedy. Additionally, the chapter title has only 1 quotation mark.


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Surprised that Frosty didn't put a bullet through him when she had the chance now that we've seen more of him. :facehoof:

Well, Frosty doesn't know about this stuff. And she's a self-described "good little pony."

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(I don't really know what to tag this under!)

Blood was thicker than water, but information was thicker than blood.

... And sometimes there is a lot of blood.

“Elaborate,” I ordered, sitting up straighter. “We’ll see if you’ve been a good use of my time. If not, I hope you don’t mind being in the redecorating business.”

“Huh?”

"Want to hear a joke? My great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great grandsire, Jericho the Confessionist first told this joke."

"I don't think..."

"What is black and white and red all over?"

"Uhh..."

"A frivolous zebra scum who is a victim of domestic abuse."

"..."

"You are not laughing are you? You do not find that funny do you? Perhaps the humour is more physical. Fancy a demonstration?"

“Oh. Well, uh, some Steel Rangers r-recently moved into the place around Seapony Energy and they’ve been wrecking the local trade,” the zebra quickly stammered. “They’ve glutted the stores with healing potions, supplies, ammunition, everything! You’ve got to put a stop to it.”

They're penetrating the bureaucracy!

Knight Red Wine has been a little slow ever since he took that grenade to the face.

I used to be an Inquisitor like you. Then I took a grenade to the face.

Junior Paladin, I am an Inquisitor of the Steel Rangers. Do you understand what that position is?

NOBODY expects the Steel Ranger Inquisition! Our chief weapon is overwhelming firepower...overwhelming firepower and disciplined tactics...disciplined tactics and overwhelming firepower.... Our two weapons are disciplined tactics and overwhelming firepower...and Ministry of Technology materiel.... Our *three* weapons are disciplined tactics, overwhelming firepower, and Ministry of Technology materiel...and an almost fanatical devotion to Applejack.... Our *four*...no... *Amongst* our weapons.... Amongst our weaponry...are such elements as disciplined tactics, overwhelming firepower.... Amongst our weaponry are such diverse elements as: disciplined tactics, overwhelming firepower, Ministry of Technology materiel, an almost fanatical devotion to Applejack, and high-tech power armour - OH BUCK!
:facehoof:

“Ugh. You know what, just find him. If he runs, shoot to disable and then detain his ass.”

“Just his ass, sir?”

"Celestia's massive mammaries! Must I explain everything to you Knight Pudding? At this rate I may just agree, because that is all it appears you sorry wastes of good abortions can talk out of!
MOVE!
:flutterrage:

In the grim darkness of the Equestrian Wasteland, there is no black and white. Only Steel.

Wow. That is one awesome universe if I'm the only one in it!

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In the grim darkness of the Equestrian Wasteland, there is no black and white. Only Steel.

That is because transuranic heavy elements may not be used where there is life...
:trollestia:

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The original quote was to have it say 'gray steel' in reference to the different shades of morality, though it was changed in the end. Can't remember why.

So, I wanted to read this before I started memories and man do I hope Souffle gets what's coming to him...

Can't really comment too much on story and characters since it's only a prologue, but I'm definitely interested to see what happens.

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Excellent! Welcome to the dark side. I have punch and little bread things with shrimp.

Great job favorited and liked
But I was wondering were you hungry when you named all of the steel rangers?

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I don't care what canon says, Steel Rangers are food-themed. JUST BECAUSE IT'S FUNNY.

4868230 true its hilarious, plus there were a couple rangers in FOE with food names. :)

I like this guy. Unfortunately, I have a feeling that he's going to end up as a bad guy in the next story. Oh well.

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Go find out for yourself in the next bit of the story, Memories!

7263060 I'm currently six chapters in.

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