Well, didn't read it here but I loved it when I read it on gdocs, so you get upvotes, faves, the whole shebang. Awesome story, looking forward to the next chapter.
I don't usually hit 'like' on the first chapter, but damn. You did good, son. The characterization of all the various people is clear and crisp, and the doctor (*snicker*) is that perfect blend of brilliant and idiot that I've seen in people IRL. "Egads, they're messing around with Killing Joke! Boring." I hope you continue.
Showers sneaking into the experimental orchard felt like incredibly bad news. Looks like well have to see if she turns out like Zip. Good job on Zip, by the way, that horror changed the whole feel of the story pretty much immediately.
Clacky is best. Hooray for Clacky!
MEGATRACK
WHEN NORMAL TRACKING IS NOT ENOUGH
I'm getting vibes of 'The Thing' from this. I approve.
Well, didn't read it here but I loved it when I read it on gdocs, so you get upvotes, faves, the whole shebang. Awesome story, looking forward to the next chapter.
Yeah! It's Clobberin' Time!
...whaddaya mean, wrong Thing?
I already gave you my two cents over in the gdocs chat, but I thought I'd just let you know I'm looking forward to seeing this continue.
SSSSSSSSSSSSgood.
I don't usually hit 'like' on the first chapter, but damn. You did good, son. The characterization of all the various people is clear and crisp, and the doctor (*snicker*) is that perfect blend of brilliant and idiot that I've seen in people IRL. "Egads, they're messing around with Killing Joke! Boring." I hope you continue.
Showers sneaking into the experimental orchard felt like incredibly bad news. Looks like well have to see if she turns out like Zip. Good job on Zip, by the way, that horror changed the whole feel of the story pretty much immediately.