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Skyfire Storm


I write slice-of-life fluff.

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This is a story about Blue Skye, a Pegasus colt who wanted to follow in his parents' hoof-steps and become a weather pony. Together with his friends and family, he goes through life's ups and downs. Join him and his friends as they discover the magic of friendship and maybe something more in the process.

And that's about it for the description, everyone. Sorry, I'm not good at writing descriptions.

I accept all constructive criticism. Please read the story and let me know what you think of it! ~ ST477

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 33 )

Not a bad beginning. Can't wait to see what future chapters will be like.

This was a nice chapter that explained Blue's birth and how he first learned how to fly. Well done.

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Thanks, Auto! I appreciate the comment.

Comment posted by Skyfire Storm deleted Jan 25th, 2014

Chapter 2 will be uploaded very soon. Stay tuned, everypony.

I'm expecting this story to have about 15-20,000 words once it's done.

Nice story so far. I like how you are blending other fanfictions with your story. Great job.

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Glad you like it, Sage :D

Nice job with this chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

I need to somehow create a cover image for this story....

Chapter 7 should be up by tomorrow if you're wondering when it'll be published.

Possible publish dates: March 29-30, 2014.

Good chapter. Remember you have to help resolve the problem with Rainbow Dash as well. Best of luck.

4185695 Yeah... I need to make a chapter where the problem between Blue and Rainbow Dash is fixed.

You should have Storm Blaze and Blue become best friends. Best of luck with the next chapter. Great job with this one.

4232527 I'm gonna try and have Storm Blaze appear as a minor character in Chapter 12 or so. I'm not featuring him in the next chapter or the one after it.

By the way, Thanks for the positive opinion on this chapter.

4237055 Change of plan - Storm Blaze is appearing in Chapter 11.

Love it :rainbowkiss: I can't wait for the next chapters :pinkiehappy:

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I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, Thunderblast. If you're wondering when chapter 11 will be uploaded, I'm thinking Friday, Saturday.

I can't wait for the sequel. Great job with this story and this chapter.

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I'm glad you like it, Sage. Thanks for your positive feedback on this story.

Yay i'm in Chapter 12 :3 I love the references to my fanfic too XD

I would not be surprised is Spear was related to blueblood. Best of luck with the next chapter. This one was great.

Awesome :pinkiehappy: Can't wait for Chapter 14

Nice chapter. I liked how Blue is now Private. Best of luck with the next chapter.

I'm surprised you asked me. I would say, I would love to read the backstoreis of your OCs. The more you know about a character the better. Personally, I would read those stories or profiles in a heart beat. Great chapter with the proposal. Is the epilogue going to be the wedding or Blue's first child?

4412759 Well, neither of these. I'm planning for the wedding to be in the next story and if I do a chapter where Meadow gives birth then that'll be in the next story as well.

Yes, I say you make more backstory fanfics. BUT... You should try a different writing style in future fics.

4416719 Yeah, I'm planning the sequel to have some elements of his backstory up to the present day, but it'll also have all new adventures.

Finally he proposed! :pinkiehappy: Now, when will they get down to business if you know what I mean :trollestia: just kidding. I can't wait for Chapter 14 and the sequel. Again, for the sequel, I suggest trying a new writing technique, maybe something like mine.

4436137 Ha ha. XD

Yeah, maybe I should try an "Under the Moonlight"-styled fic. I don't know. Maybe the sequel will be like that.

Sad to see this story ending, but I can't wait for the sequel. Best of luck.

A bit sad to see the story go already :fluttercry: but at least there's a sequel to look forward to! Can't wait :pinkiehappy: But as I said, you should definitely try a new style in writing. Instead of adding the dates, let the audience figure out what time the paragraph or the chapter is set in. Add a little bit at a time, like "x happened a year ago" or "I can't believe that was just a few months ago", don't add the date.

Might end up rebooting this sometime in the future, I don't know.

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