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"To resurrect the dead alot of power is needed, so what better source is there than you my dear Twilight Sparkle?"
It was all explanation she got before the first experiment, now a month later she can hear the sounds of war emanating from far below, one side is doing their best to free her, for the other side she is merely a tool a way for the king of the dead and harsh lands to the east to gain more influence.




"Life is change, chaos, filth and suffering.
Death is peace, order and everlasting beauty"


(Story will contain necromancy, undead beast, vampires and the like if that is not your kind of story then this is probably not for you.)

Rewritten and touched up from the start

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 8 )

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

9486334
you mean blackthorn? well I mostly imagine both he and the soldiers to look like alarak from sc2 but I guess the voice would be dunno maybe the sweet calm voice of eliphas voice of dawn of war

Looks interesting, I'm interested to see where this goes.

My OC can easily deal with Blackthorn and the kingdom he's loyal too as if he was taking a casual walk, either by himself or with his army of rahkshi and exo-toa of which he has thousands of rahkshi and exo-toa combined.

I've noticed a few capitalization errors scattered through both this and the previous chapters, but no spelling errors.

Good story so far, and I'm eager to see where this goes.

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yeah im usually good at spell checking but I am horrible with . , and capitalization

"Life is change, chaos, filth and suffering.
Death is peace, order and everlasting beauty"

Yeah I think whoever said this got a few things wrong and missed a few for example

Life is change, chaos, suffering, beauty, evolution, love, strength, lazyness, determination, perseverance, hope, trust, generosity, kindness, friendship, aggression, ect(there are far too many things to list in the one comment)

While death is stagnation, order, filth, rot, decay, wasted life, entropy and silence

And then undeath is suffering, chaos, imprisonment, endless rot, stagnation, loss of will

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