Spike is over at Rarity's assisting her in the development of her "Winter Fashions" when Rarity notices her young assistant is getting sleepy. This gives her the perfect chance to try out her "Other" line of clothing in which is sure to make mommies and daddies everywhere rejoice!
The overall focus of this story is around creating a "Safe", "Comfortable", and "Relaxing" sensation through the feelings a baby may have. Touch, taste, scent, and sound all work together to lull Spike into the most restful sleep he has ever had while showing how there is a bit of mommy in Rarity.
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why the f*** is there a "Romance" tag here? unless I'm not seeing the romance of a mother putting the equivalence of a newborn who pisses his pants, to sleep.
and second, is it some type of mind control or reverse-aging fetish you're going for here? Spike is at least 8 years old (though it can be argued that he's at least 16 mentally) and now he's reduced to a pants-pissing baby who needs a pacifier... Label and summarize your sh*t correctly so I know what I'm gonna read! I was expecting more romantic in the sense that they would BOTH fall asleep in each other's arms LIKE ROMANTIC ADULTS! (and I thought it was going to get that way when you said "her "Other" line of clothing in which is sure to make mommies and daddies everywhere rejoice!" but I guess I misread it.)
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Sorry that this wasn't a story for you. Though, I do appreciate your time and thoughts. Can't get better without inputs.
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Romance is a bit loose. However, the bond between a motherly figure and a child is an intimate one. So, I figured I'd go with the tag due to how intimate the two were as the story progressed.
And, nope! Not mind control. Just going through a series of "Feelings" that would work towards creating such a comfortable situation that Spike would allow himself to just get swept up in the moment and allow himself to be putty in Rarity's arms.
Overall, I am sorry you didn't enjoy the story. Though, your time in reading and commenting is appreciated. My material tends to largely only work with a niche audience that is familiar with the sorts of references I make for how they themselves wish they could feel the safety and comfort of being in a situation where they have no worries beyond simply existing. To escape the pain of everyday reality through a desire to feel "Little" again.
Having spent much of my childhood in-and-out of hospitals, belittled by others, and becoming an adult who is largely ignored and/or looked at funny due to having a degenerative, visual condition, this sort of work is a representation of how there is a part of me, as in others, that wishes they could go back to when life wasn't about being seen as a "Burden" or "Strange" for being "Different".
So, in the end, my work will largely not be your cup of tea if you did not enjoy much, if any, of this story. I write to find solace from knowing I will be totally blind very soon. This is what makes me happy, makes others like me happy, and I am glad to share such material with those who do benefit from my ability to create it.
May you have a great day, stay pony, and continue to enjoy all the wonderful works this site has to offer.
3740683 I didn't enjoy it primarily because of three things:
1) I have a loathing towards diapers, scat, and watersports fetishes in general...
2) I see Spike in the light that he is an adult minded being trapped in a child's body... and I am saddened, disheartened, and even angry when I see his treated like this...
3) and lastly because I am literally the opposite of the preferred demographic: I am the type of person that wants to encase and bring wormth to, not be wormed up...
And honestly, if I were to have known those thing were in there, I would not have reacted the way I did
That bitch. Spike is gonna be sooooo pissed off!!!
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Actually, if you did have what I have and have been through therapy as I have, you'd find that it is "Healthy".
We all have our ways of "Coping with Reality" and, so long as the way you cope isn't doing any harm to yourself and/or others, there are many ways in which to "Self Soothe" a traumatized soul.
The way illustrated in this story is clearly not a way in which you approve of. However, there are others out there who find solace in feeling "Little". Just as there are people who play video games, watch movies, write stories, collect items, etc.
So, again, this may not be what yo personally would agree with by any means, but it is one way for which some do find peace along with the usage of properly regulated medications and visits to a therapist.
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You are most welcome to your reaction and I am glad you are able to share your feelings as you do. Honesty is indeed the best policy.
What makes fiction fun, especially when based on fiction, is one can interpret it any way (s)he chooses. This is but one of many interpretations of Spike and Rarity that I have done. Though, it is interesting how the works in which I do NOT write of Maternal / Diaper things I get ZERO comments on. *Shrugs* Oh, well.
Again, your time is appreciated and your honesty even more. Without such criticism, I can not grow as both a writer and individual. Getting a stronger understanding of how others feel of my particular, special interests helps me know how the outside world feels about those like myself and, as such, makes me more aware to keep it "Low Key".
One cannot help how one is. We can work on changing our interests, or hope interests will naturally change. However, some things are just ingrained and, as such, need to be explored through being brave and writing about them in order to fully understand one's self and how the world feels towards one's feelings towards a particular concept.
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Thanks for your time in reading and commenting on this work.
I know Spike would've preferred Rarity staying with him after she lulled him into such a relaxing and deep sleep. However, Rarity is not one to pass up being fashionable and, well, she still does have a winter ensemble to finish.
Like from me!!!!!!!! Man, your stories are on fire. Awesome!!!!! I really enjoy your Spike and Rarity mother and foal play. Once again, AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very cute and sweet story!
Rarity being like a mother to Spike, cradling him, rocking him to sleep, and all that. Might want to check myself for diabetes. Great story though. it would be cute I think if maybe you could do a story with the rest of the Mane Six, except for maybe RD treating Spike like a little baby. Just a thought. 
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It makes me very happy to hear that you enjoyed this story. It was meant to "Capture the Senses" through being descriptive of all those feelings one may feel when in the comfort and security of some pony they trust.
Stay pony and have a wonderful day!
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You know, that would make for a cute series. Every pony in the "Mane 6" having a "Mother's Day" with Spike.
Though, if I do it, I'm going to be posting it strictly to my Fur Affinity account. The trolls here are just too much for me to mentally handle. Especially when pony is supposed to be all about "Love" and "Tolerance" towards each other and I get cursed at and told I have psychological issues for writing what I do.
Thanks so much for reading and for the inspiration. If you have an account on Fur Affinity, I am the same name over there. "Yosh-E-O". If I write it, it'll be there. Yep, yep!
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Thanks. Be sure to check out my stories too!
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I shall have to do that. Any recommendations?
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Certainly! "My Little Pinkie", "Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash: Sisters Forever" and "Zecora's Little Colt" are my best ones. "A True True (Boy) Friend" is my newest. Feel free to like and favorite as you wish
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Thank you. The one with Rainbow Dash sounds cute. I think I'll fave it for future reading.
Thanks for taking the time to give me some fun stuff to read. I promise I'll get to it ASAP.
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And no, thank you for some awesome Spike stories to read!
Hope you enjoy!
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I love Spike, and I think he deserves to feel like a little kid / "Baby Dragon". It seems his life was rushed too quickly towards being "Responsible" and "Mature" that he missed out on some very important things. Like having condition-free love, affection, and some pony who would truly make him not have to seem like a servant.
It's funny, if you think of it, how Scootaloo and Spike have a lot in common. Both have no real parents. They also both are "Different" from every pony else. Scoots can't fly and Spike is, well, a dragon amongst a world of ponies.
I bet the two would do well on a shared adventure of "Self-Discovery". Though, Scoots won't leave the CMC and Spike is too attached to Twilight for, as far it seems, he associates his self worth with pleasing her.
You make me so happy in saying you like my work. So many people have given me such a terrible time over what I share. It makes me feel so much better to know that, as I had hoped, some ponies out there truly are full of "Love" and "Tolerance". It's supposed to be the "Brony Way" and I thank you for embodying it.
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You and I are alike. I like to write about adult or teen foals. (Working on a new one right now). Spike is awesome. And you're right. He may be eight(a lot of other stories say it), but he should be able to be young.
And you can feel free to write a Scootaloo and Spike story. I sometimes have to change a few things to make my stories make since.
(By the way, that Rainbow Dash story I gave you will contain some shipping)
3750590 Oh, okay. that sounds interesting. I visited Fur Affinity a few times and I like the work on there too. I will check you out on there.
I would like to read that series if you do, I think it would be cute for each of the Mane Six to be the mother of Spike for a day. 
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I'm cool with "Shipping". Especially since, quite honestly, I'm still learning the difference between "Romance" and "Shipping". That is, if there is one.
My favorite, pony character is "Scootaloo". I love Scoots for all she is and how she has done so much to not let her disability get her down. Yay, Scoots!
I don't know what I'll write next. Though, it is nice to NOT see "Hate Letters" anymore.
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It's funny you should mention that story concept as, while at work, I did dabble in how to make it work. Now it's just a matter of making it happen.
It's just unfortunate so many Bronies do NOT live by the "Love" and "Tolerance" concept that is supposed to unite us all. I hear Bronies complain about Furries all the time. However, little do they realize, they are really one-and-the-same. The only real difference is Bronies are, for the most part, strictly pony while Furries have a whole host of characters in which, in large part, are OCs out the flank!
Fun Fact: BronyCon 2013 advertised on Fur Affinity.
I joined Fur Affinity initially to see if I could ever find anyone who could help me understand "The Person I Was on the Inside". The one I hated hiding and feeling awful about. I found that assistance, and then some.
As I've continued down the path to total blindness, I have enjoyed the site for how accessible it is to my specialized tools I use to run the computer. The people have also never ONCE cursed me out in the 5 years I've been there. A miracle, considering I'm of the DL persuasion.
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Would you like to know who is the shipping couple? Or do you want it to be a surprise?
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I'll let it be a surprise.
Though, if you don't mind, could you tell me what the difference is between "Shipping" and "Dating"?
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I don't see a difference between the two. Well, shipping is true love. Dating is common relationship. That's my best prediction
Spike has been a good baby Dragon, he deserves more diapers and mommying from Rarity.
But I don't see a place in the story where Rarity put a diaper on him, when did she do that?
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The first article that he felt pulled up and around his waist and tail was the diaper. The rest was the special sleeper she made.
While she was dressing him.
Mind you, they aren't spelled out and that was on purpose.
I wanted this story to be about "Feeling". Give the reader a chance to kind of get the sensations of comfort Spike was getting through Rarity's efforts until he lulled into the deepest and most coziest of rests. 
Thanks for your time and comment. It's nice to know not every pony here has nasty things to say about an innocent, mother / Baby Dragon bond.
I was asked to do a series where each of the Mane 6 get to try their hand at being a "Mommy to Spike". I want to do it, but I am reluctant to post it here for the degree of trolls that exist.
If I get to it, I'll probably post a journal linking to where I'm posting the stories. I think it will be fun doing my best to play out each of the Mane 6's Pros and Cons on being a mom. Though, in this case, Rarity will always be best mommy.
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Okay, well I think you did a great job at accomplishing that with the way you did the wording.
And thank you for noticing my niceness, but I will speak on things though.
This paragraph sort brings back the old question of "Is Twilight a mother, sister or girlfriend to Spike?" that is asked sometimes in the fandom but I think personally that Rarity would actually make a better mother to Spike instead of the fillyfriend and (dragon?)friend that they are together in the show canon.
Which isn't to say that I support the opposite case where Twilight and Spike are lovers. 
Um, you are aware you can block comments and users, right?
And IMO, I think Rainbow Dash would be the worst mommy and Rarity would be the best mommy.
I am glad you take the canon literally that Spike is ababy dragon (why wouldn't the canon be illiteral?) which, in that case, there wouldn't be anything odd about a baby acting like a baby.
I love long comments!
PS: Is your username a reference to the Michael Jackson movie, "Captian EO"?
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I'm a fan of long comments, too.
It's neat when folks go on about how Spike "Isn't" a "Baby Dragon". Sure the show doesn't over-and-over say, "Spike, the Baby Dragon". However, if you see the card for him in the new CCG, it clearly states, "Baby Dragon" as his sub-description.
You're right, I could just ignore the comments and/or block the users. Though, my "Hate Club" always varies per post. My favs are the ones that feel "Mislead" when they read the titles.
It's actually funny that no pony has yet to get that, for the most part, all my Spike stories are all based on statements Rarity made in "Dragon Quest". Even more, the statements are all made by her within a 30 second span after Rainbow Dash disses Spike for wearing an apron. 
As for my name, have you ever played "Neopets" by chance? If so, there is a book you can buy in the stores entitled "Scorch E O". So, when I decided to be something more original than "Yoshi Ducky", I went with "Yosh E O" as a spin-off of the Neopets book.
The full name my avatar goes by now is "Yosh E. O'Ducky".
And, I would agree that Rainbow Dash would agree that Ms. Dash would not make a very good mommy. I have a number of thoughts on how to show how her personality could make for some dangerous and/or neglectful times.
Fluttershy would be an epic mom, but over protective. Twilight would be tough, though. I can see her getting so caught in "Doing it Right" that she spends more time getting the right supplies and baby-proofing that Spike would spend most of his time alone, or strapped to her back in a Baby Carrier.
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There you go, canon beats the most accepted show canon. (Although he does act older for a baby dragon.)
Wait, are you saying most of the people making hate comments are the same ones who, for some reason, fave your story?
I've heard of Neopets, but I never played it. The only MMOG I ever played was an offcial lego BIONCLE game.
I think that why she has Tank, because Tank wouldn't need a lot of care.
This is how I would rate the mane 6 on their "mommyhood" scale:
(Best) - Rarity
Fluttershy
Pinkie Pie
Applejack
Twilight Sparkle
(Worst) - Rainbow Dash
And if you were by any chance wondering the best "foal-story" in the genre is, that would be "My Precious Baby" (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/138903/my-precious-baby) at least IMHO.
And of course there is room for critque in the entire genre. For instance, when the pony turns into a foal, it's usually never permanate, and it;s not liek they get adopted at the end or anything. And it's usually the foal(s) doing something cute and then the story ends by them becaoming adult ponies again. But the above mentioned story breaks all those rules.
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Thanks for the story recommendation. I will go fave it so I can access it later.
*Sigh* No. I never get the same haters. I get fresh haters for each post. I have yet to ever get a repeat troll.
What's weird is I get trolled first, and then folks like you start coming along. It's very strange.
I agree with your scale on "Mommyhood". The only area that is difficult, in my opinion, is whether Pinkie is better than Apple Jack. That's a tough one. A real, tough one.
I didn't know they made an online game for BIONICLE. That's cool! Was it as fun as the toys? LEGO has tons of concepts and worlds now. I think they are releasing a big movie about most of them here in February.
Thanks again for all the support and suggestions. It is very much appreciated. It's folks like you that make always teeter on whether-or-not I should stay here. I don't want to be "Scared Off" by trolls. However, I don't like to be sworn at and be told things like, "I need therapy" when, honestly, if they knew anything about me, or those like me, stories like these are therapy.
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Um, you are aware that there's a "Read Later" button, right?
Well, that's the randomness of being on a site with search engines...
The reason I chose Pinkie Pie above Applejack because I figured Pinkie is more fun and energetic (she's my fave Pony) and has experience with taking care of the foals because of the cakes, whereas Applejack, even though she can be sweet with her country ways, has only the experience of taking care of animals and apple trees.
I'm more into the storyline/plot/mythology than into the sets, even though I think I have 5. I just ordered all 4 movies from Amazon, soI'll be back to being aspie obsessed about the franchise once again.
I'm sure your different IRL....but there's honestly a fan fic for everything about any franchise.
I've found out the No. 1 way for people to like a fan fic (even dispite the storline) is to write it so good, that even if the person hates the story they are attracted by the writing alone.
If I were to recommend to copy off of or learn from any authors for just the writing, I would choose:
William Shakespeare
Charles Dickens
Edgar Allen Poe
Mervyn Peake
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Each have made their own, unique impact on the world of writing through their unique methods of storytelling.
Good choices in authors.
For me, I've learned through trying to get published that "Writing is Subjective". It's all a matter of getting the right work to the right person who is in the right mood at just the right time. If you fail to do all this, you'll be bypassed.
There actually was once a study done where some people took works by Poe, Dickens, and others and submitted them to publishers without the names written. Each of the works was "Rejected".
I'm actually pretty much the same IRL. What you read is what you'd likely get if you and I talked in person.
I don't know if this is one of my problems, but I'm legally blind. My vision is terrible and I mostly know of certain things through descriptions and/or foggy views of what is there. I wonder if I may be a better writer if I was actually more able to understand "Non-Verbal Communication"? Being descriptive has been one of my biggest challenges and I continue to try and work on it. Only through feedback, like yours, do I get to know what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.
With web-sites, I don't often find a lot of the "Features" for they aren't easy for me to see. I use "Special Settings" and glasses to work a computer. Eventually, when I go totally blind, I'll be using a program that reads to me. I wish I didn't miss so much, but I do my best.
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And they're all (except for Poe) English.
I an more anti-social IRL actually.
I understand, my brother's best friend is about 75% blind.
And personally, I am pretty sure that the fave you gave to "My Precious Baby" will stay not just for you remembering the fic.
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I'm pretty sure I'll enjoy the story, too. Usually, when I get a recommendation from someone like yourself, I tend to genuinely like it. This is why I seldom look for work when I am on here. I let those I can be friends with guide me and I am not disappointed.
I really appreciate your kindness. It makes me feel good about still popping by here to check on things. There truly are some bronies who believe in the "Love" and "Tolerance" concept.
this is not cool making rarity dress spike up baby if she wanted a test she could of use sweety belle my thoughts on are pretty much in the red with this and good thing she didn't went with the direct approach and say spike do be a dear and put on these baby clothes and let me act like your mother .I'm sure a lot people could see being cute that way but i don't and that's my opinion
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Opinion accepted and appreciated. We are all entitled to them and, as such, I am glad you took the time to share your honest thoughts.
This story was "just adorable!" I really wish there were more stories of Spike being diapered and treated like the baby he really is.
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I'm happy that you enjoyed this story. It was fun to write and a great opportunity to play "What if?" with Spike and Rarity.
I may write more like it in the future, too. I'm just currently stuck between these sort of ideas and doing tales about Shining Armor and Cadence. Yet another great couple.
4546542 There's a group on here called "Diaper Lovers and Adult Foals" that this story would be a good addition.to.
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Ooh! I wonder if any pony may have added it there yet? If not I may need to join so I can be a part of the herd who would appreciate this sort of tale.
Thanks for the advice!
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Next "Spike the Crash test dummy " Cute. funny sleepy'
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Thank you for taking the time to read this story. Thank you again for taking notice of how it was meant to be relaxing in nature, too.
This was a tale I used to try a different style of writing. Mature writing isn't my strong point so I tried to go for a little mature with a lot of safe cuteness to show Spike's feeling of comfort as Rarity aided him in feeling like he was in paradise.
What a lovely little story. Thank you for writing this
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It's for individuals like yourself in which I am most glad I put up with the trolls to share my work here. 
It makes me very happy that you enjoyed this little tale.
Have a wonderful day and thanks again for your time and your comment.
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This tail was adorable , loved the way spike was soothes to sleep
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I'm glad you enjoyed the work. There is truly nothing better than feeling a sense of safety, security, and most importantly
Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
I am suddenly imaging Rarity encountering an unexpected side effect, Of spike imprinting onto Rarity as his mother, and keeping an extremely young baby mentality