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Icudeadnow


This is a bio. Fear me. Also, ponies. That is all.

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I stayed up from 12:00 AM to 7:00 AM trying to finish and edit this. I... am... so... TIRED.

that was awesome... very nice.:heart:

3738113 Thanks! I'm thinking of making this into a full-fledged fic, but It'll probably be a one-shot. Who knows. :twilightsmile:

I'll make up my decision in two days time. Around there.

3738937 That's pretty awesome of you to say, man. Thanks! :twilightsmile:

It doesn't take much to sway my decision...

Oh, damn. I forgot that I couldn't link mature stories! Please don't hate me, Knighty! :raritydespair:

Better be well written, because I'm already hating you for taking the foalcon fun out of it! :twilightangry2:

3740723 I love foalcon stories. :twilightsmile:

I just felt like writing something different for once.

How aged up, and why the creepy picture?

3765558 Twenty two aged up. Don't worry. :twilightsmile:

Because it was there and I wanted to use it.

Okay, just read this and while it does have a LOT of unanswered questions, the main one I might as well ask is: DO you plan to continue this? It's still marked Incomplete, and it's been a month since you submitted it, but not sure if you have plans to explain what exactly happened between AB and Celestia in the past, how they grew to love one another perhaps, etc. And it is a rather unorthodox shipping, but hey, I recall one on here that involved AB and Discord and have seen lots of other unorthodox ships. But hey, sometimes I like those, clopfic or not! :twilightsmile:

Also, what's this about not being able to link mature stories, in a previous comment? If I may ask, even if it's none of my business. :twilightsheepish: I assume it's maybe about the no NSFW blog posts anymore, rather than the odd pictures in a couple spots in the story.

3910451 Well, at first I decided to continue it, forgot about it, remembered, decided that it was gong to be a one-shot, changed my mind and decided to continue it, forgot it AGAIN, and now, because of my confusion on HOW THE HELL I forgot so many times... I'm not sure if I should continue. I've actually been thinking about it lately. Actually, I was thinking about it a couple of hours ago. My schedule is cleared up, so I have more time to write without worrying about personal life getting in the way. So, I may or may not. I have too many stories to work on, a lot I've been neglecting as well. When you get to the amount of stories I've reached, it gets to become more of an unpleasant job rather than something you enjoy. I know that's not true of some people, but in my case, yes. Sometimes I get in a writing mood. That's all it's ever been, really. I get a 'spur of the moment' writing mood period and take advantage of it. That's why I've been taking on a lot of one-shots. After I complete all of the chapter stories, which might even take the rest of the year, I will only be doing one-shots. Back to the story at hand, I'm not too sure now. I'm sorry if you were looking forward to this, but I really wouldn't get my hopes too high. These story will probably become a one shot. Who knows, it might become a short chapter story, because if it dopes become a chapter story, that's what it'll be. Short. I'll make a blog telling people if I'll continue it. Since, as I said, I have more time on my hands, I might just undertake this task.

3910451 About the no linking mature stories rule? Yeah, that's a thing. :fluttershysad:

Good writing, though there is a part or two that could be better
This:

She could feel the heat between them both. She mostly felt Apple Bloom's heat. Her lips were actually slightly hot.

It sounds unprofessional and choppy. It's just like playing music. You don't want it to sound that way. In writing, short sentences can be used, most definitely, but not like that when there is a way of getting various related thoughts like these together in one statement. It could be worded differently but have the same meaning in a more professional manner, like this:

Although Celestia could feel both of their heats, she felt Apple Bloom's over her own.

Just some food for thought. Otherwise, awesome! :raritywink:

wow that was hot, i mean HOLY SHIT.

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