Twisted Wind was just a regular middle-schooler when he gets his wish granted and goes to equestria! But what awaits him there is a force of untold evil, waiting for the best time to strike! Join Twisted Wind as he goes about on a quest to defeat the menacing forces of darkness!
A/N this is my first story so please be nice in the comments also no vulgar please
No... Just no.
Why are they so obvious.
I'm awaiting the serious comments by those who are less perceptive.
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3736065 What?
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:^)
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:^)
>Added to Human in Equestria
>Doesn't have Human tag
3736275 oops sorry. i'll fix that
3736297 it's not, thank you very much.
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I seriously doubt that.
Being a bit more subtle would help.
On the extremely off chance you're serious, go pick up a book and read it. Then read about it. Then read the TVTropes about it. Then read every example it gives and why those are good or bad.
Then you may look upon your works, ye lowly, and despair.
By this time you might have some competence, maybe enough to have a serious team of pre-readers and editors salvage what you inflict upon an innocent web-based text document.
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I called it out as a trollfic.
Those likes are probably fake, but so is the whole thing.
What the hell is that cover art? Is that actually supposed to be a pony?
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Go easy on the coverart creature, someone already broke its legs with a tire iron.
I think it's in agony.
The picture said it all, it's an obvious trollfic, try harder.
I haven't experienced this level of bad in a long time.
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he's a member of ''the decent writers club''
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kill it before it lays eggs!
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I only had to read 3 paragraphs to see that this is TERRIBLE. There is absolutely no pacing, the characters have personalities as thin as fucking paper, the main character was a dick in describing humanity, and why would a portal open in his computer?
Wow, HOW CLICHE
I've BEEN on 4chan, and still go on it, he'll get just pure hate if he went on it, coming from a story like this that's HORRIBLE.
Wow, that was fast.
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Wow, again fast how they became INSTANT friends, not giving one two SHITS that a random pony was just laying on the floor for no FUCKING reason.
YOU DON'T FUCKING SAY?!
Well, THAT gave it away, so now she has a crush on this shitty ass OC.
Gee, OP much?
Really? So now, the wonderbolts are gonna want you in their team, (Not like they'll EVER accept you that is.)
Fucking serious?
What...?
(Skip to 3:55
YEAH, TOTALLY, SOMETHING HAPPENED AND NOW JUST FORGET ABOUT IT AND PARTY ON
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GEE I DIDN'T EXPECT THAT
*Dashie*
ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?!
SO APPARENTLY, OUT OF THE ORDINARY, HE CAN NOW CHANGE INTO A MARE, BECAUSE HE'S "SUPPOSEDLY" A CHANGELING YA FUCKING SURE. AND MY NAME IS FUCKING RICK AND I LIVE IN FUCK SHIT AVE.
Mordor called, they want their troll back.
It takes a special talent to write "so bad it`s good" fiction. You? You lack it. It`s just bad, plain and simple.
This is very amusing. It's comedy, correct?
This was... pretty gross.
This is literally the pinnacle of up-fuckery.
Best story. 2014.
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You guys realize this is a trollfic with a troll account, right? Go look at his favorites.
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Whelp, I'm an idjjit. I fed the troll.
EDIT: GORRAMMIT REGIDAR!
(jk i wuv yoo)