You know it's time when the clock strikes twelve.
“A pony told me once to never mess with the past. Now look at the state I am in right now...”
Scootaloo accidentally caused her friend, Applebloom to fall off a cliff. Right now, her friend, Applebloom only have a slight chance of being alive.
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this is really cool, thanks for writing it!!
3734462 Glad ya liked it.
Oh..my lord I think I see what happened. .
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you did?
3734721 I can imagine them just going back and forth with Sweetie Belle, trying to alter time, but the other getting distraught. Then again, maybe Scoot should have told her what originally happened.
3735336 She did. In the last chapter.
Wouldn't it be funny, if Applebloom went back in time to save Scoots, the Scoots went back in time to save Applebloom, then Applebloom went back in time to save Scoots. And it continued like this until they both realised what the other was doing.
3738332 Yup! Totally agree! I was thinking of doing a bonus chapter once I'm done with chapter four for Leave, Forget, Move.
i really like the story but there is a problem the spell sweetie bell cast is a ADVANCED SPELL. In All About Time twlight could only go back in time for a little time, and twilight is ADVANCED IN MAGIC, and this is SEASON 2. I love the fic but continuity is important.
3740018 I never thought about that. Whoops. But thanks for telling.
That is ok it is a really good fic though.
Your were aiming for sad and tragedy, but your lack of an editor or prereader meant that it was too difficult to strike your target amid your poor English language skills.
3808762 I'm aware of that. This is my first story, and my first time ever writing it, and my English is kinda bad, so there is a lot of spelling errors or grammars. But i tend to improve it. The sad and tragedy failed very badly, i know. But hey, i am willing to work hard, and try hard to improve my story writing.
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Hence my advice of finding an editor. I don't know where the best place would be to seek one, but I'm certain it would help.
Poor Scoots! She really isn't bad!
That‘s a nice story,I wanna traslate it into Chinese and share it with Chinese bronies.May I get your authorization?
3913167 sure! Go ahead. :)
Yeah，thanks.