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Patient X


Defining "unneccessary" for a decade.

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After being accepted into the "Ponyville Sanatorium for the Criminally Insane" for his expertise in neurology, Dr. Ross Caxton begins to lose his sanity.

Inspired by the song: "Flood" by Tool.

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Comments ( 20 )

young purple pony with a black mane?
TWILIGHTS MANE IS NOT BLACK!
:facehoof:

331464 This is a very, very good story. It just needs a little polish. Hit the return key a few more times in order to break the wall of text. You should also think about revising some pieces of the text. More detail; showing vs. telling.
The only thing that gets me is the ending. It is predictable. :applejackunsure:

i must draw crazy him!

Reading this was a very interesting and enjoyable experience.
i'll be sure to read your future works

Very good, very creepy, although I was expecting more of a twist ending. Keep up the good work.

what is his cutie mark? :rainbowhuh:

334006 Hmmm...'tis a good question...I'll add that :pinkiecrazy:

Daaym.

Ya know, there's some evidence that schizophrenia is actually infectious...

Also... were there any unicorns at that facility? Perhaps one got out of their magic damper?

:twilightoops:

Good Job :ajsmug:

Uh... That cover art looks like Verruckt, just saying.:unsuresweetie:

3930024 It could be Verrückt for all I know. :twilightoops:

Damn, that's some fuckin hardcore shit right there. I love it! :yay:

He Picked Up A Scapel....(Which Is...Duh,A Sharp-Ass Medical Knife) And Cut His Jugalur......Was He That Afraid Of Himself...... On A Small Note,I'm Going To Give A Small Insanity Speech From A Man Who Was Like Ross Deprived Of Sleep And Saw A Mangled Version Of Himself...And This Is What His Mangled Version Said"Have You Forgotten Who I Am So Easily,I'm What Everyone Hides From In There Bed At Night,The DefInition Of Nightmare,And I Am What Makes People Await There Death With Excitment....Remember,I'm YOU!!" And With That The Man Took A Knife,Cut His Chest Open,Ripped Out His Heart And Popped His Eyeball Out So That He Could Watch Himself Bleed To Death,And...He....Laughed And Smiled Before He Died,,,,,I Just Felt This Was Related To This Story.......Goodbye....

Yeesh..I Came Out Sounding Like A Creep:facehoof:

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