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Paradise Oasis


Royal librarian of Dream Valley, writer of Ponykind's greatest generation!

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Daring Do and her fan-turned-friend Rainbow Dash hunt a powerful treasure in the Past, while their descendants hunt the same artifact in the present. Can both sets of adventurers prevent evil from obtaining an artefact, that threatens both Equestria and Ponyland?

Chapters (16)
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Comments ( 32 )

This story is AMAZING!! Where did u come up with it?! :pinkiegasp::raritystarry::pinkiehappy:

Such a cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

Comment posted by Pigeonsmall deleted Jan 3rd, 2014
Comment posted by La Vallett1 deleted Jan 3rd, 2014

*after reading this chapter*

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Imagining both Firefly and North Star in bunny waitress suits was very funny!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Excuse me while I step outside and laugh uncontrollably.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Lesson learned: Never trust a rat.

3736768 A literal rat in this case

Heh, In G4 this would be considered raunchy. In G1 a pony in a bunny dress would be cute.

Cloud gremlins? Do they ride on the clouds or do they have tiny planes?

Good chapter though I noticed a fair amount of spelling errors. I guess fresh eyes will always pick out things the author misses.

Huh so Velvet is the Publisher.

That actually makes tremendous amounts of sense. It not only reconciles the comic with the show, but it explains Twilights love for books. Good thinking!

"Whew, I really can do this like I used to anymore."

Is she meant to be saying "I really CAN'T do this like I used to anymore" ? It feels like thats what's supposed to be there but its an error.

I guess age has made Daring less Daring and more Cautious. But her intuition about the rat were correct.

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Cloud gremlins? Do they ride on the clouds or do they have tiny planes?

I think he was referring to these:
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They are from the Rainbow Dash Micro Series Comic.

"Why the flank didn't we see this coming?"

Indiana Jones probably asks himself the same question

Buildings retain many things, belongings, ponies, food, but the really old ones contain something more prescious...memories.

To think that both Pinkie Pie and Discord were random.:rainbowderp:

3868653 Surprise may have some of their genes in her family line somewhere.

I feel like the fight between NorthStar and Firefly was unwarranted. It was too violent for what amounted to nothing but petty insults.

"Um... Bah weep gragh nah weep ninny bong?"

I see the universal greeting didn't help.

Artefacts like that belong on the bottom of the sea.

3897805 Actually, they belong in the fires of Mount Doom. The lava will do the work in destroying them.

As for the artefact, the description makes me think of Sombra, strangely enough.

Dun dun DUH!!!

Daring does have a point, given how many books she's written with Azutohil as the villain he really should have done something new.

Just a couple spelling mistakes that I noticed:

Any who stand in shell be crushed

Any who stand in my way, shall be crushed...

just like you've beed after every Pena

just like you've been...

I really wish this stupid gave of ours was finally over!

stupid game of ours...

Other than that, perfect as always. :pinkiehappy:

Hahaha! Too bad the universal greeting didn't leak into My Little Pony.

At first I thought the troll was going to be the Moochic.

why the hell did you made Daring into an evil manipulating jerk? She sacraficed her friendship for her own selfish wish? That IS not Daring Do...

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I would note the slab/ or view of events with her cuts off right after the battle, it doesn't say she didn't reconcile with Dash after this adventre. And she did what she did to end azutohil's treat because she's getting old and can't fight him anymore.

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Also Yearling has stated repeatedly that she is NOT Daring Do.

I'd hate to see what this stone can do in a crowd, real time.

Looks like he's done for.

I just saw a story here:

[T] It is to Laugh!
Surpise is invited to the great Bright Valley goof-off, a grand contest of humor meant to honor the legendary Pinkie Pie. But will an unexpected prankster from the shadows steal the pony prankster's title of comedy queen?

I wonder what happened to it.

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