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Blue Paratroopa


I'm just a typical fanfic writer. I hope to be a voice actor or a writer for TV and film someday, but for now, I'm writin' on the Internet! Other than that, how are you?

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Everyone's favorite ponies act out everyone's favorite Disney stories! And no, this is not a (shudder) "fanmake." Hopefully it'll have some more originality. The first story is "Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs," starring Fluttershy as Snow White, The Crusaders as the (four) Dwarfs, and Trixie as the Wicked Queen.

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It's a cute little story. I love it.

Love it!! :heart:
The Story is Awesome!!! :pinkiehappy:

I love it. Please continue.

@Blue Paratroopa...

Just a suggestion... It might be better for both you and your reader audience to separate each CrossOver story into separate works, rather than just lumping all into one fan-fiction.

For example(s)...

~ 1. My Little Disney: Flutter White and the Four Crusaders [current in-progress]

~ 2. My Little Disney: Sleeping Rarity
- [Maleficent / Queen Chrysalis]: ...and she shall prick her hoof upon a sewing machine, and die!
- [Merryweather / Princess Cadence]: She shall not die, but sleep upon her fainting couch until awakened by True Love's kiss!

~ 3. My Little Disney: Cinderjack (or "Applerella"? hmm...)
- [Prince Charming / <insert MLP:FiM equivalent> ]: For whichever mare this Stetson truly belongs to, she shall be my bride!

~ 4. My Little Disney: Twilight Beauty & the Beastly Dragon

See the pattern? Keep a consistent title for reader recognition, but have each story in its own separate fan-fiction. This also allows you to describe the cast per CrossOver fan-fiction in their respective story Description section(s) as well

3728419 You're very right. I have taken your advice!

3729750...

Always happy to help &/or provide guidance. :twilightsmile:

I also suggest shortening the series-title, and perhaps adding a numeric so readers know which placement it is in the overall series.

For example:

Disney Tales (#1): Fluttershy and the Four Crusaders

or...

Disney Tales I (then "II, III, IV, V, VI," etc.): Fluttershy and the Four Crusaders

...or some other reader clarity equivalent.

Oh, and you are welcome to make use of my creative examples (from previous Comment) for your series if you like them. :raritywink:

Do mulan with Applejack as Mulan

Ok someone is doing this! Very good!

Let's see: The Hunchback of Notre Jument

Twilight as Frollo

Rainbow as Esmeralda

??? as Hunchback

Inspired by this video! Dagayemar might give you many ideas for Disney fics!

The word Twilight means to use to describe herself is "Omniscient" (all-knowing), not "Omnipresent" (is everywhere). You may wish to correct that, unless you're making a point of her getting words mixed up (which would admittedly be pretty funny).

3910243 Thank you so much for the tip! I have a habit, unfortunately, of getting words a little mixed up sometimes. Hopefully I fixed all occurances of the word. :)

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