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The Infinity Doctor


Remember, the future starts, with YOU!

T

Sam the ordinary human gets turned into a hybrid to save his girlfriend, meeting new people (and ponies) along the way.

P.S. I started writing this before I read 'Black Queen, Red King', if there are too many similarities between this story and that one; my apologies

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 116 )

Proofreading could make this really shine. :pinkiecrazy:

I love this already! Keep up the good work!

Don't mind what the haters say, this story rock's!

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice! Keep it up!

MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE *cough* what i mean is i would be delighted to have more of this story, as well as no-one believing hes human, at all.
:scootangel:

EDIT: i fav'ed your story by the way, chrysalis probably should not know about mlp:fim if it is in this story

It is interesting, but you should get a proof reader, maybe.

I still love it, keep up the great work!

It is interesting, but I'm confused on how much of Equestria Sam knows about. He knew about Queen Chrysalis, so he must be somewhat familiar with the universe (unless Changelings exist in some other form of Fiction in Sam's World), but apparently knew nothing of Nightmare Moon or the events of the first episode, which he would have realized he was a part of when NM appeared at Town Hall. Other then that, nice work.

3734540 He didn't know about Chrysalis until after she revealed herself

Is it wrong that my name is Sam?

oooooooo! In still lovin this! Keep it up!

3739023 wait your not canceling it are you??? Don't its awesome

Gary stu mcguffin the alicorn/changeling which used to be human but now he has a quest an the story has not even BEGUUUUUN! :flutterrage:

I am still reading this, despite disjointed story line and just plain missing dialog. It has a grade of about 60% and yes, there is some Gary-Stu. But, hey, I like Gary-Stu and Mary Sue! Only way you'll get better is by writing (or typing), so keep it up and keep honing your mind.

3739338 What makes you think I'm cancelling it? (I'm not, by the way)

"No...I am not...somewhere, someplace...something is wrong, very, very wrong"

Like... Every other dramatic scene ever written?

3739371 All changelings have wings and a horn...

"butt little did silent/sam/KING-OF-NO-CHANGELINGS! know that the government would whoop his ass if they found out his... dirty, little, secret" :applejackconfused:

Dat was to good man.:yay:

when they ask him who he is make him say "they call me a terrorist, a murderer, a monster. i am all of these things"
XD

this is going to be good, and waw that was a good one. also if he can be a dalek dos that mean he is invincible?

3802571
ya I gest that but your going to have to do something to change it so he can be a dalek but not to strong like his weapons don't work, or something. or you find a way to make them les strong.

3823373 Thank you for your input :pinkiehappy: What's SMS?

I'm gonna read this one, I'll let you know when I'm done!

Lab

I'm not sure if this is a story or just the summary of one. Even when reading slowly, I couldn't help but feel my eyes were just skimming over everything.

Furthermore, you should read the submission rules of any group you submit things to.

3880787 Why thank you, I hope that you enjoy future installments,:pinkiehappy: You have no idea how much your support means

this is going to get good reel fast.

3881147 WE HAVE NO NEED OF COMFY CHAIRS! EXTERMINATE! ERROR- SYSTEM NOT FOUND

you do know the crusaders wern't formed till after the return of nightmare moon dont you?

3914823 This is during Season 1, the crusaders were already together, weren't they?

i noticed that you where telling people that mirror was your sister and now your telling them all shes your daughter, you should prob fix that lol

You have earned my comment.:pinkiehappy:

3959101 just to let you now I wonted to say some thing more but I used all of my good one's on other story's and I don't like saying something twice.

3961312 I don't mind if you repeat yourself :twilightsmile:

3961318 it isn't I wont but more like I can't. soon after I use a good comment I forget it and I can't remember it. it sucks having a bad memory.

3961358 ya I now but it sucks more if that bad memory gives you spelling and speech problems. in other word's I am like derpy some times :derpytongue2:

WOOP WOOOOOOOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FIRST!!!!!!!!! Epic fantasticness is what this story is made of. :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

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