Just a MLP:FIM fan who's had a troubled life.
Not sure when I'm going to post my cover art, so this one has to do for now.
When Rarity finds herself in a concrete room, strapped and chained to a wooden bench with nopony else other than the Apple family, she is shocked by their strange behavior. Especially that of young Applebloom, showing signs of bloodlust and hunger.
She only finds out her purpose and the Apples' origin after the full moon shines through a hidden window...
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Well... that was... dark. It's an interesting idea about the Apple family being cursed and having to turn into werewolves and all, but it almost like a ripoff of Cupcakes. Applejack gives Rarity drugged cider (Pinkie Pie gives Rainbow Dash a poisoned cupcake), Rarity wakes up in a dark room with the werewolf Apples (Rainbow wakes up to a psycho pinkie
), Apples kill Rarity (Pinkie kills Rainbow). I'll just say it now I absolutely hated Cupcakes, but at least this wasn't as... gory. That alone probably makes it better than Cupcakes. But as I read this, I couldn't help but be reminded of it. I understand it's your first fan fiction and it wasn't too bad just... don't remind me of cupcakes 
AJ kills or takes part in the killing of Rarity? Insta-favourite! I hate Rarity... So much
Please expand on this story.
Would anyone want me to write a prequel to this? Applejacks first transformation perhaps?
Me: Yes! Make more!
Good story.
Whoa.
Uhh...
Rarity... no...
Rarity:
Apple Jack:
Rainbow Dash:
Pinkie Pie:
Twilight Sparkle:
Fluttershy:
If this is how he likes to write, let him write like this. If you don't like it, don't read it. I enjoy writing sadfics, yet if you tell me you don't like it, I'm not gonna change my writing style.
I'm not saying you don't have a perfectly logical and reasonable point, but don't tell people what to make. Find someone who already makes what you want.
(I'm not trying to be mean or angry at all)
Wub and Tolerate!
I love Rarity (best pony!), but this fic is great with an interesting concept. Keep up the good work!
I liked it. Its better than cupcakes (don't remind me) as in its not as gory (which is good) although it is kind of a rip off of cupcakes. I still think think it would be cool to write a prequel. Its a good first story really.
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Thank you sooo much^^
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I'm writing the prequel now, thank you :-)
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Thankyou^^
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Thankyou^^
I wasn't actually thinking about Cupcakes as I was writing this, but as I now read through it, I get what you mean
I'm writing a prequel now ^^
Can't wait!
3728910 Thanks for writing the prequel, I will be sure to read it
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But cupcakes are good for you.
I love this story
I only wish that when applejack turn into a werewolf. I wish that she screamd out. that she was sorry. for Rarity is her friend.... Right?
i cant find the prequill, if it is even real.