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In their childhood, Queen Chrysalis, Cadence, and Shining Armor were all the best of friends. Until Cadence falls in love with Shining. Chrysalis can't do anything but support her, even if she harbored forbidden feelings for him as well.
Alas, love always comes with a price.
Who will be willing to pay it?
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A very good story start.
Thank you so much for the comment and the favorite!!
you're awesome!
Brohoof to you! /)
Nice story.
3721254 Thanks a heap!!
Brohoof! /)
WingedBrohoof i got a question when will the next chapter of this story come out
3771609 Ah, I just posted a blog regarding that, and as quoted in the blog, I announced the postponing of the update to Sunday, January 18.
3772314 ok and now i see the blog i did not see it before sorry about that
3772322 No, no, no, no, no, don't sweat it
I should be the one apologizing for my irresponsibility
3772336 ok and i forgive you
for your irresponsibility
Well... This sure has a lot of emotion... but many lines had more than one speaker in the sense that two dialogues are from different speakers but are in the same line/phrase/sentence, it was confusing for a time. Might want to fix that a bit in the future.
3794440 Oh, okay, that's good to know. I was trying to change the perspective from Cadence's point of view to Chrysalis's from time to time. The ー dividing line should contrast one POV from the other. I'm sorry if that was confusing
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I understand the perspective change, but you have to admit, there are two different dialogues in some of the sentence and they are not from the same speaker.
Edit: Pinoy?
3796648 Pinoy is the Philippine informal slang used in replacement of Filipino; both are used to describe the Philippine nationality
I like how you change perspective.
Great story.
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Yet the slang is widely used. Although, Filipino Was originally used to designate Philippine born Spanish children who had one Philippine born parent.
3801200 Was it? I didn't know that
Though, it makes sense, considering that the Philippines used to be Spanish territory for about 300 years. So, resulting from this, a lot of Filipinos have last names that sound Spanish, and the Tagalog language was derived partially from the Spanish language. There is a Philippine dialect, however, that is based very strongly from the Spanish culture.
3721254 Thanks, mate!
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Yes, I know... anyway I did not want that small question of mine to escalate to a debate of terms. Are you a Filipino? Your avatar has the flag there... and it should be the hoof by the chest... If there is one...
3801318 Yes, I am a Flippino (in modern terms meaning I'm from the Philippines); I couldn't find a picture with the hoof to the heart
.... It's like an American salute to the Philippine flag 
Yeah... it seems like that, I'm sure... Twilight has that kind of pose.
3801338 Yeah, and there's this video of Niall Horan saluting to the Philippine flag
The American salute
Better than nothing, I guess 
True enough. By the by, I'm also a Filipino, so sorry about being a critic about your work and your lines...
3801356 No, no, no. Ikaw ay Pilipino? Bakit hindi mo sabihin sa akin??
Mahal kita!! 
Naku po...
Oo, Pilipino ako. Naman. Ikaw ay and pangatlo kong nakita na Pilipino sa site na ito.
3804246 Sino ang mga iba pang dalawang?
3804555
Hm... di ko na maalala and pangalawa pero ang una kong nakilala na Pilipino ay... ang gumawa ng Gentlemanverse
3804576 Ah, nakita ko.
. Hindi ako nakakakita ng bronies Pilipino madalas 
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yun nga kung bakit dalawa palang ang nakita ko.
3805430 Oo...ako pagpunta sa sundin mo
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Kumusta!
3825449
Mabuhay!
I demand a source on this cover art!
3961289 It's by Cizu on DeviantArt
3961360 Thanks.
3961457 Yeah
It is over. Congrats to you.
Wow
4120179 I thought as I wrote the damn depressing feels...
4120138 About time, too
This kinda sounds like an alternate universe fanfic. You sure it's not one?
4125227 I was considering that, but I thought alt. universe would be something that affects canon scenes directly... Oh. Actually, yeah I think it is..
I thank thee. I'll make sure to add the tag!! Thanks!!
Great chapter. People who dislike this chapter know nothing about great stories. [then again, there were a few dislikes on BOWTB Assimilation. Which is a great story.]
Deep stuff. Deep stuff.
Great story. Liked.
4126103 Thank you so much for your appreciation!