Ice - Fimfiction

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Three Equestrians wander Earth, the low-magic planet of humans, in search of the portal home. Expansion of "Ice".
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Twilight
Spike
Discord
alarajrogers · 13k words · 124 5 · 3.3k views

Ice

Twilight, Discord and Spike are on Earth. Except it's Antarctica. And Equestrians lose their magic on Earth. And it's very, very, very cold in Antarctica.

Not related to any of my other fics.

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RainbowDragon

RainbowDragon #1 · Dec 31st, 2013 · 7 · ·

I feel cold now

Shpoople96

Shpoople96 #2 · Dec 31st, 2013 · 11 · ·

Too bad it's >complete

Blood Brandy

Blood Brandy #3 · Dec 31st, 2013 · 4 · ·

A humorous, if dark, little story, I will admit.

Bad Horse

Bad Horse #4 · Apr 19th, 2014 · 15 · ·

I was able to figure out who was talking all the way through, so good job. More of an exercise or character sketch than a story, though.

Spiritofchaos227

Spiritofchaos227 #5 · Aug 6th, 2014 · · ·

Oh gosh... Did they die? :( Please make a sequel to this!

Spiritofchaos227

Spiritofchaos227 #6 · Aug 6th, 2014 · · ·

4809293 you know.. If they and not dead..

World Builder

World Builder #7 · Sep 17th, 2014 · 5 · ·

It's absolutely clear at every moment who's speaking. Very well done.

lunarstallion

lunarstallion #8 · Sep 23rd, 2014 · 5 · ·

I love it. Never read anything like this before, and I can see that it ended up very good!

kotor511

kotor511 #9 · Jan 21st, 2016 · 2 · ·

Just read this as a bonus for the new Not The Hero chapter.

I must say, you really write the BEST Discord, character wise.

Surprisingly, or maybe not, both Twilight and Spike feel very natural too.

This was both funny and entertaining, also it feels real even if it's just dialogue. It's not hard to look at, you know exactly who is talking by the words used, so I'd prefer this from instead of some of the mainly descriptively written stories out there. Feels like this could actually be in an episode, except for a overabundance of mentioning killing, being killed, or death in general, cut that out and the 'only dialogue' format makes this true episode material.

Von Voctavia

Von Voctavia #10 · Nov 17th, 2018 · · ·

This story reminds me of a Twilight uses a portal to come to Earth story, in that all she finds is a frozen wasteland, and a small wooden hut with some supplies and a log book. Thinking the entire planet is frozen, she signs the Arctic Research Station's logbook and leaves. I wish I could remember what it was called.

Parametric Ponymorphism

Parametric Ponymorphism #11 · Nov 17th, 2018 · · ·

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You might be thinking of Twilight Sparkle Discovers Earth.

Von Voctavia

Von Voctavia #12 · Nov 17th, 2018 · · ·

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Yes that's it! I forgot they didn't use #humans which is a tag I tried searching for.

Minalkra

Minalkra #13 · Nov 18th, 2018 · · ·

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Huh, guess I didn't ... Oops.

Ranakastrasz

Ranakastrasz #14 · Nov 18th, 2018 · · ·

I instantly compared it to the stargate episode.

Interesting dynamic. Also reminds me of all the times people try to convince Discord of life afferming chaos. All it takes is fixing a desperate situation with his chaos magic in a rediculous way for someone to gain a positive opinion of him.

melodic_harmony

melodic_harmony #15 · Nov 18th, 2018 · · ·

"Oh. Well, I can't feel my dragon paw, either. Or my talon."

Lion paw

alarajrogers

alarajrogers #16 · Nov 18th, 2018 · · ·

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No, his lion paw is heavily furred and has slightly more protection from the cold than his reptilian paw, so it's correct as stated. If he'd been standing bipedal he'd probably have said dragon foot, but on all fours it's one of his paws.

That being said I'll probably make it clearer in the rewrite.

melodic_harmony