Ideals are peaceful. Reality is not.
The spell worked flawlessly as the pink band wrapped itself around Flutterbat. In a bright flash, the fruit vampire pony was gone.
As well as Fluttershy.
Hopefully she didn't end up getting into any trouble.
(Submitted for EQD's 2013 Writer's Training Grounds Challenge just for the heck of it)
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Awesome.
I'm just confused about Fluttershy became an allicorn. Or if she will continue to be one. 
Overall good story though.
3717150 If I'm honest with myself, this is a bit of a compact version of the story I wanted. I had to do quite a bit of slimming down before it was acceptable by EQD's writing contest standards. I'll likely go back and fill it out sometime in the near future.
Thanks for the compliments!
3717240
Ah, I see.
You're welcome!
So I get back from a week in Mexico, and I find out you wrote this. Awesome!
... I need to find some way to use that.
3717240 I would very much like to read an expanded version of this.
Oh, ok then
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