one word HOT.

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Thank you!

Please more ASAP

Not bad.

where's the comedy tag?

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Just added it now. Wasn't intending it to be overall comedy, but I guess the situation itself is humorous.

boner

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Nicholas Cage is always relevant

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Wasn't intending it to be overall comedy

Are you kidding?! I was in stitches!

My sides exploded and tears ran freely reading this! God it was so great ~
Comedy gold! I'm crying‼

I don't even like scat, but I liked solely to balance out the dislikes from the little shits who disliked just because this is scat.

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I'll take it! It's annoying to get so many downvotes from people who think "ew, something I don't like, let's tear it down" Thank you

Awesomeness and hilarious!!! Maybe one where its just pee would be also great.

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Little shits.
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Well now I'm done being slightly strange, let me say I'm impressed. Its fetish fuel that has stuff to say about relationships which is hard to pull off. Also seems to be cleverly tied in with sleepless in ponyville.
...and Rarity takes it up the rear, I just knew it.
I know what its like to be thumbed down due to content so upvote from me.

Aww theres more poo groups than wee groups - no fair.

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Possibly, not sure. It's interesting, but I feel like I'd be cutting myself half off of what I'd be wanting to do.

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Part of the arousal for me is the situation, not so much the actual act itself. I could just as easily write some 2,000 something word story that has Rarity dumping a huge load and spend it talking about how big and gross it is and whatnot, but I'd get no pleasure from that. I want to tell a story that's somewhat enjoyable separate from the fetish fuel, because it actually makes me (and hopefully others) more excited when they actually get to that part, where the "fun stuff" happens.

Glad that you liked it, that means a lot.

Wow. I'm honestly surprised by how many dislikes this had. Aside from a few minor errors, this was very well-written. People shouldn't dislike a story by the content within it, but the quality of how it was written. It clearly stated it was scat in the description, so if they didn't like scat, they shouldn't have read it only to dislike it. Even though this was scat, it was funny, clever, and enjoyable. This doesn't deserve the great amount of dislikes it has. Keep up the good work!

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Thank you very much, hearing people say stuff like this sort of makes up for the many dislikes I'm getting.

THIS is why I following you.

Thank you for this!

Okay. Confession time. I read this fully expecting it to be awful, but.... well, you are a good writer. I have coprophobia, and one of the best ways of conquering an irrational fear is exposure, which is why I sometimes read stories like these. 99% of them are pretty hideous, but this one actually made me laugh.

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Because the situation was silly, or the visuals I painted were amusing, mannerisms, anything in particular that made you laugh?

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All of the above, pretty much. And the poop-size competition was pretty good, too

I take it this is the deleted scene from "Sleepless in Ponyville"?

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Deleted scene, action off screen, whatever you want to call it, yes it takes place during SIP.

I was looking for pictures of pony loafs and now I find this stuff.

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why. just why.

Awesome, sexy story, but I call bullshit with one part: why wouldn't Applejack be into anal sex? With that apple bucking bottom of hers, she's be a NATURAL for taking it up the butt. Ah well, everybody has their own headcanons, and that's yours. :P

The confusing feelings one gets from reading elegantly worded, properly characterized...elimination smut...

Hard to summarize.

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I'm sure it's not that hard to summarize if you give it the old college try.

I like how you wrote this fetish. This is the kind of watersports/scat that I enjoy.