Applejack gets into a freak accident while bucking apples. The doctors say she has 100 days to live. She, along with her friends, try to make their last days together perfect. Applejack has a lot she wants to do and tell a certain pony her feelings.
- I do not own the cover image! I cropped it a little, so it is different from when I got it from Google. Please, if you made this image, please tell me!
It is a very well written story. My only critic is... what exactly happened to Applejack? Maybe you should add more detail, rewrite that part... etc. But otherwise, great story. I love the plot!
Oh, and p.s.
FIRST COMMENT!!!
>>cherryfeather101
Oh, I have every intention to explain the accident in the next chapter or two. Thank you for the comment, though. I'm glad you like it so far!
It's a very good story so far. I hope you will continue writing it!
i love your story
when will you continue the story?
This story has great potential, but I suggest getting a solid editor to assist. It is a bit difficult to read as the flow is a bit off. Keep at it though, I am sure you will improve the more you write.
5219882
oh thank you! :) I will look for an editor! It seems I always have story flow problems :P Thanks again!
4555698
Thanks it means a lot to me that you say that. I'm sorry I didn't continue writing for a while. I was on a long vacation
3911352
Why thank you! Of course I'll continue writing this! It's just I got a little behind because of my vacation. Sorry