• Member Since 12th Dec, 2012
  • offline last seen July 9th

DarkPhoniex239


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Quote marks maybe?

Well, this should be interesting... though I kinda have to agree with Evil_Gumbo, quote marks, use 'em.

7164971 ok my bad thought m,y editor would of fixed that issue guess not lol

7164973 It happens, at least you have an editor.

7164985 I probably should get one at some point.

Which reminds me, I really need to get back to work on chapter 3 of my fanfic.

7165006 Thanks, you too, I look forward to seeing what happens next.

If I were you, I would join the Helping Hooves group. Your story shows a lot of potential, bit without proper advocates, your story can get out of hand. If anything, what I do is wait a day before posting it. Then, next night, reread and edit it, and then read it over Skype and even sometimes Twitch. Then, flatten out the bumps, and, whazzam! One story, good as new! Hope I helped! :twilightsmile:

7166835 Anytime! I'm also a *competent* reader (Honors English asshole), so just tell me if you need help!

7166842 apparently my editor forgot to edit alot

You missed out a lot of punctuation

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