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Rarity Belle
A Dutch gentleman of leisure, living for pleasure, since mirth is my measure. Writing stories that are (mostly) unique and psychological of nature and visiting conventions whenever I can.
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I am sorry to inform you but this does not what so ever belong in M/M clopfics M/M means Male on Male not Female on Female this F/F this really upsets me to go to something that says M/M when it appears on my feed only to find out its F/F instead for that I down vote I'm sorry. If you wouldn't have posted it in an all Male folder then I may have never seen it and I may have even never had put a down vote on it. Read the labels is all I have to say for you. Sorry. Also futa doesn't count for this section either I'm sorry to tell you that bu it doesn't. May I suggest transformation group for that? Really it seems like it would be a good story but it doesn't belong in the M/M folder.
3750374 My mistake, thought it meant mare/mare.
3750507 ...I am not going to change it to make grammatical correct. As I find it suiting a bit more this way.
As for the 'while drunk' part...hehehehe, uhm...well...no. I was perfectly sober when writing this really.
3750463 ok for explaining why which i have done many mistakes like that myself i retract my down vote and give it an up vote.
3751533 Well I owed you some now didn't I? And, I thank you kindly for it darling.
this felt like a roleplay of pinkie and rarity. the actions were fine, the dialogue was wooden. you could pretty much replace a colors(mane and fur description) and names, and the story would remain the same. their words are nothing more then the lustfilled words of lovers, Not Personal enough to identify with pinkie or rarity respectively. this fiction wasn't bad I must say that, it's just the talking the was lacking. I hope that made sense
Somebody want to write the Rarity/ Bayonetta crossover I just thought of?
3750374 Actually as he/she said (don't know which don't care right now) it is a futa of sorts.
Futanari is a character that shows traits of both genders. rarity made a magical suit that MELDED with her body meaning she had to have changed her body somehow (which yes is transformation but it is still futanari) so in the end i actually have to go both ways in this argument
The first I notice, is that the Title is incorrectly spelled, aside from the capitalisation. Please correct this instantly.
The second issue I came across, is the summary, it stumbles a bit.
Before I even go into the story, correct the break line in the summary. [ hr ]
Note that sily little details, even in the Title, Description and Summary can ruin the story for a reade, and that some will vote accordingly. Personally, I will wait untill I choose to read the story, before I vote.