• Member Since 28th Nov, 2013
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Pinkie_rees


HIYA, I'm writing something, or at least I thought I was? Oh well, we'll find out soon enough!

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Two friends find themselves in the usual overplayed HiE situation that many fan fic writers have dreamed of since Pinkie Pie first broke the fourth wall. But what makes this story different from the others is great aspects of the two change greatly due their new form's and they will one day have to face the fact that they may never be able to return to who they once were.

Special Thanks to Golden Skies for the editing and support.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 5 )

I'm judging harshly. :trixieshiftright:
I don't really care for HiE stories, or the style in which you are writing, namely, the whole, first-person thing.

But I love this story! It is amazingly written. While I would change a few things, I think the story overall is incredible. :pinkiehappy:

There are a few spelling errors still, but other than that, it's good! :pinkiesmile:

3722579 Hey thanks, I kinda wrote it off a whim, lol. I will become more dedicated to it though, so the quality should start steadily increasing.:pinkiesmile:

P.S. Your oc is adorable.:rainbowkiss:

3722715 Lol, what does that mean?:derpytongue2:

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