Scootaloo is depressed with the events of past days. Felling like no one cares about her, she makes a decision that will affect not only her, but everyone she knows.
Those we love may not know it if we fail to show it. Those we hurt may hurt us back out of pain and loneliness.
Don't neglect those closest to you.
Sorry, but grammar freak here. You just murdered my eyes with "bursat" instead of "burst out" and generally poor grammar and spelling in a few other places. I'm sorry, but I'm truthful. You still deserve a mustache for your story, though.
Thanks! Glad to know some of the errors that need fixing. I'll get those done soon.
Not bad for a first. I think with time you'll become much better, I'll be watching you
Simpley fantastic! I really liked it, Scootaloo sadfics always get to me though. You made me cry, and for that, I say you did a very good job.
Yea! I'm glad to hear that. I think another one will be ready tomorrow... maybe.
Okay. I fixed some spelling errors and made some minor changes. Nothing to change the storyline, but make it... better... I think.
There may be another story continuing off of this one about Apple Bloom coping with the losses... maybe.
I haven't decided yet. Until then, It will stay "incomplete".
Hope you enjoyed it!
Man, you must seriously be into tragedies... not that I mind. I am always looking for something sad to read.
Yeah, I kinda am. Just something about getting all emotional...
Don't dry don't cry come on don't cry BUCK I'M CRYING <------ WHY MUST SHE LOOK SO HAPPY
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“…never stop the journey…”
Then she could here her no more.
Seriously? That is not okay!
4021973 I know, I know, I don't know what came over me!
4025127 I'm not even kidding; I didn't stop crying for 38 minutes. I am surprised I'm not DEAD!
4025364 Drink lots of water so you can keep crying!
4025551 I drank 10 bottles of water last night. I have certainly met my water quota :P You should make more of these ;)
4025564 I have...
Rain of Tears
Wings of Silver, Hearts of Gold
"I'm so... so sorry..."
I Failed...
4025579 I'll check them all out! But of course, my preference does lay in the realm of CMC stories, whether sad or romantic.
4025809 Then check out Wings of Silver, Hearts of Gold, and Rain of Tears... both are about the CMC, mostly.
4025816 Sweet! I hate the lack of good CMC stories anywhere on the internet. I hope I just hit the jackpot
4484606 Thankee
ah the feels im crying now
5366004
Well I haven't read that many sadfics before but thanks to you i am hooked, your stories are amazing and i can't thank you enough for sharing your works:)
5436545 Thank you! I'm really glad you like this! And this isn't even my best story
Yes Aloo a great story!
5768077 Thankee!
I feel that tearjerkers are my specialty.
5768101 that's not a bad thing. I actually appreciate crying myself to sleep sometimes
5769878 Crying is a necessary human emotion. It helps us relieve stress, sadness, even anger. It's why I write tearjerkers.
5769899 And i respect that!
my story isn't a sad but it's nice would you care to read it?
5769926 Sure, link me to it
5769927 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254370/lives-change
be gentle it's my first story
5769927 it's called lives change
5770038 I'm 'reviewing' it right now =3
5770042 i'll try to improve, sorry
5770167 Dude, no, don't be sorry. That was NOT the point in my comment, I was trying to say it was good, it just needed some work, like all fanfics. I like it, I really do,. It was good, and you can bet I'll be following it =3
5770187 alright
5772228 Sorry, I didn't mean to come off as not liking it or saying it was bad. It's a good story so far =3
5772830 it's totally fine i've actually heard worse about my story
but I'm going to make your jaw drop by the end HaHa!
I has a sad
wish I could post a photo ????
At edge of cliff “hey can I fly yet?” “Oh that’s a shame” crash
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