The window through which we perceive life is what defines our experience of it. We are only aware of a small fraction of what our senses pick up. We can all choose how we see the world.
The two former teammate trainees from the Wonderbolts Academy meet up once again in Cloudsdale, but not for a friendly reunion especially with their past still haunting Lightning Dust's nightmares. Rainbow Dash takes Scootaloo on a little tour around Cloudsdale to show why some pegasi live there, that is until Lightning Dust tells Scootaloo her version of what happened when she went to the Wonderbolts Academy with Rainbow Dash.
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I can't say much, but I must say the concept does sound interesting. You do have an error or two in this story. If you read it over, you'll notice them. I would like to see where the story goes from here.
3681705 I'll work on it, when I notice the errors. Thanks though!
This is good, which makes me confused as to why I'd be the first to review here, but good all the same. Nice amount of drama with some good action coming up along with what has happened so far.
3686443 Thank you! It means a lot to me since, I've been having some grammar issues lately and trying to be as descriptive as possible.
Which is very good. Also made me remember just how strict and militeristic Spitfire is, not a good thing on their part.
(Sorry for this I don't know how to reply.)
3686501 It's okay. The arrows are the reply button that are on the right side. I'll keep up the good work.
3686513 Thank you and looking forward to more of this.
3686524 Great!
3686536 Yep.
3687767 I'm glad to hear that!
3689303 Haha not really going anywhere with this but I don't mind agreeing back and forth.
3691271 Oh okay!
3691294 Yep.
3691299 We've come to an agreement!
3691324 Yep again.
3691344 Fantastic, I've got to continue writing now. See ya!
3691358 Later then.
3691551 Later1
Goddangit Lightning Dust stop doing this bullshit! Scootaloo isn't really rainbows sister but I don't really care, it's a good story. There shall be a favorite!!
I like the story
3733776 I'm glad that you liked it! I hope it wasn't a waste of time reading.
Oh wow this was an amazing story! Glad to see someone appreciating Lighting Dust,hits hard in the feels to
Wonderful job 
3739812 Thank you, my good man! It means a lot, glad that you enjoyed it.
4443712 Thank you, glad that you liked it!
I'm sorry but still err I just noticed an error. "Spitfire i understand that 'spitfire'. Wait wut
4809473 I'll fix that right up.
Thank you.