• Member Since 22nd Feb, 2013
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FictionFreek


Just a simple guy who likes to find a shining light, even in the darkest of places.

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On Hearths Warming eve Spike found himself alone in the library after a gut feeling told him that he needed to stay in Ponyville. But as the time ticked away and Spike's faith begins to falter, did he make the wrong choice and is doomed to spend Hearths Warming without his friends and family? or will Spike finally get the one thing he has always wanted?

Entered into the Sparity oneshot contest

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 28 )

3681768
Is that a good wow or a bad wow :applejackunsure:

Great story :)

This is a fantastic Hearths Warming Story,
All the feels and the emotions to back it all up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:duck::heart::heart::moustache:

3682853
Glad you liked it :pinkiehappy:

3682859
Happy Holidays!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good and..
WHO DISLIKED MY COMMENT, WITH NO PRIOR.KNOWLEDGE IF THE CRY:flutterrage:PTIC MEANING

3683500

It's all good, I balanced that shit out for you bruh.

:ajsmug::moustache:

I feel thanks...3683774

Well, that was sweet. I think I need to go see a doctor about my new diabetes problem.

3685721
Sorry about that :twilightblush: probably should have put a warning.

3686225 Yes you should have!

That being said, I'm not sure if you wrote this to write it or for the Sparity contest the group is having, but if it is the later it needs to be placed in the contest folder to count.

3686649
Wait, there's a contest? :rainbowhuh:

You have "waked" instead of "walked" and "class" instead of "glass," but otherwise it's pretty well written. It's very cute and simple.

That was exceptional.

hmm, not bad. for a moment there i thought spike's lil feelin was crazy or somethin n' he should hav went with twi to canterlot but, in t end it turned out to be right :yay:. poor rares thou - hope that flankhole had a good enough reason to stood up her up or spike might need to hav a stern talk with t loser :raritywink:

... Yeah, too quick. Not enough time to just reflect and allow the scenes to sink in... not to mention its a little jarring to go from Rarity talking about what she had wanted a stallion to do, then say the stallion she wanted was a drake... never got any reason why the date missed the date, and Rarity's fear... why would a growth like that lead to Rarity avoiding Spike?

This was a nice little story. I like it.

cute story with a great ending

Twi came back from Canterlot, She stepped through the door & Saw the snuggled set asleep on the couch, "OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH !

Dear Princess Celestia, Today I learned about friend ship & pets now is a good time to bring up the Spay & Nutering. . . . .:raritycry:

This was so sweet, You could feel the fuzzies.

Really cute is all I can say:twilightsmile:

IRON WILL APPROVED!

So adorable!

Who is the stallion that is to have his legs broken? :moustache:

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