• Member Since 5th Aug, 2013
  • offline last seen Oct 7th, 2023

Sidain


Just a guy that love a few things too much, drawing, videogames, music(dubstep), and now writing. Here we go

Comments ( 11 )

That is totally a chocolate starfish dangling in the moon's crescent. Kinda wish it wasn't anthro so I could possibly enjoy this.

I :heart::heart::heart::heart: this story already. I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage: Please. :fluttershysad:

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Will do.:moustache:

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Great, I'll go look for an editor, until then I do my best to not make as many mistakes.:pinkiehappy:

Italics messed up the page, shortly after the beginning. I think this line's the problem:

But that’s seems limited, there has to be more./i]

Ok this just feels so wrong. That amount of manipulation rubs me the complete wrong way. I personally hope it backfires on them. I hope Inky figures out what they did to her and pays them back somehow.

Reviewed by the Pleasant Commentator and Review Group

I see you've announced a rewrite on this. If you do rewrite it, feel free to request a re-review in the comments there.

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