4550905 Fixed!

4817591 As clop? Five. As comedy? Ninety. This was fucking hilarious... though I am plastered so take this as you may. WEEEEEEEE!! I taste colors!!!!!!!

That's one serious gambling addiction...

That was cute ^^

Something this big required the careful timing of subtle clues to let his mind slowly accept the possibility.

I can't help but find that to be abit twisted in a way.
I'm reminded of how with real hypnosis, you can only get the person to do what they would've been willing to do in the first place.
But the part above feels more like low tier mind rape. Not that I would be opposed to such a tale...

4817858 But with regular scheduling of intensive care lead by his sister, he'll be able to cume through completely.

hwa, how wha, why?! why did i enjoy this?!?!??

Well that's certainly a different take on the story. I mean, Cadance(Cadence) feels very out of character and clueless, but I suppose the story wouldn't work if she wasn't.

Peeeerfeeect. Mischievous incest ;)

4818339 Hey, I know you!

You draw good Twishining.

What is wrong with Cadance? Does she not have any hormones at all??? Someone has their overies in a bunch...

You titled it like that on purpose >·> I get enough morning glory jokes. *grumbles*

I know the canon name is Cadance. But for the record, I spell Cadance with an A only when it's Chrysalis in disguise. The rest of the time I use E. Go back and re-read Liquid Pride and see.
4818271 I'm glad you liked it.
4818436 Notice the paragraph break when a new pony is speaking. It's the maitre d' yelling at Shining Armor for breaking the wall. Sorry. The pronouns were a little vague.
4818297 4818415 I was going to have it where Twilight finds out that Shining and Cadence were so clueless as married virgins that he kept trying to do her in the butt, (without proper lube) and she never enjoyed it. But once he discovered how to sexy time properly, it would defeat the need for him to continue his 'addiction therapy' so I just left Cadence OOC as a plot device.

4818889 "plot" device , hurr hurr

Well, I suppose it migth work out all the same.

4818415
Sounds like an asexual who's convinced she's morally superior for it.

4817858
Yep!

Gambling with semen. Very risky.

"How dare she?" Twilight thought. "How dare Cadence turn down this wonderful dick? This beautiful phallus?" Twilight took in more and more, continuously swallowing as she tried to take him into her throat. "The smell! The taste!" She was in ecstasy. Her anger at Cadence fueled her gusto. "To hay with her! She doesn't deserve this dick!" Twilight redoubled her efforts. She was intent on giving her brother the best blowjob he'd ever had in his life. She'd suck his dick right off!

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Shit, I've already Upvoted this.
I want to Upvote it again.

so good

Waited for more of this and I'm satisfied!

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Hey if you guys liked this, be sure to check out my latest TwiShining fic, The Brohoof Bash!

4826191 Was my Fuck Yeah not sufficient enough to convey my excitement?

4826653 No. It was. I was just being thorough.

4826191 Might need to Read Later but shall do!

4817591 BRAVO, BEAUTIFUL, WONDERFUL, GLORIOUS!
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Awesome work as always Shakes, please keep up the epic work.

4817591 haha, I really enjoyed your chapter!
The mission impossible, the wall collapsing, the stinger at the end, loved it.

Nice cover, no one will ever suspect prostitution in a casino. The perfect plan"

sweet cover up. lets hope for more of this story

Ha omg it was the ending that's what got you the thumbs up hole crap that was funny rarely do those dumb porn jokes make me laugh bu the timing the reason and the exscuse were just...just great.

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5142866 Orly? In that case:

i had a feeling it was gonna be gambling and i still laughed so hard when Cadence said it

Shakes your work is so grand I read it through without beating and was still satisfied.

edit- you also got the story my thumbs up

"Umm, yeah... Gambling addiction."

Hmmmm... Yeah, gambling addiction...

That was too good also dat ending!

Pfft--Bwahahaha!! Gambling?! Seriously?!? Freaking hilarious.

>gambling
RiiiIIIIIIght smooth as fucl

Gambling, huh?

Seems legit.

This is very bueno.

IThis is it! Today's the day I can end this!" Twilight said. She pulled the dark sheet from the bed, rolling it into a ball in her bag. She did some quick stretches and shook herself awake. "Geronimo!" She jumped from her window off into

Plese tell me drwho references

In an instant, the door to the bathroom was kicked in. The guard in the hall checked to see what the broken glass commotion was, only to find Shining Armor missing and an assassin cloaked in black who'd clearly thrown the prince out of the window to his death.

I never took much notice the first time I read this, but this scene is amusing.