Celestia's 999th Hearth's Warming

For nearly one thousand years Celestia's Hearth's Warming Day has been a lonely time, better spent on reflection and sadness than joy and celebration.

But an encounter with a certain griffon chef may just change that fact this year...

Contest entry for the Unloved Couples group's Hearth Warming Romance competition.

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Cerulean Voice

Cerulean Voice #1 · Dec 24th, 2013 · · ·

...this is going to the top of my read-later list. Always interesting to see an insanely underdone ship.

Jioplip

Jioplip #2 · Dec 24th, 2013 · · ·

3675910 Heehee, tell me what you think when you get to the end.

Seether00

Seether00 #3 · Dec 24th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Hooray! That was unique. Celestia would be rolling in even more cakes and desserts if she had him.

Cerulean Voice

Cerulean Voice #4 · Dec 27th, 2013 · · ·

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Oh, you sly bugger. Crediting me like that! You should see my big glad smile right now

As for the story, it was quite interesting. Gustave and Celestia do make an odd couple, even as friends. There's no denying their mutual love of baked goods, though, if anything. I like how you used the blizzard during the festive season as a way for them to meet. Clever.
I wouldn't mind seeing Gustave Le Grande again -- maybe he could do exotic catering for the Equestria Games?

There is one minor thing I ought reveal to you:

revery

I believe the word you were looking for is "reverie" (meaning reminiscent thoughts/memories)

Jioplip

Jioplip #5 · Dec 27th, 2013 · · ·

3689212 Well I was thinking about your advice the whole time I wrote.

And thanks for the catch on reverie, I'll have to fix that when I get a chance.

DerpyDitzyDerpyDo

DerpyDitzyDerpyDo #6 · Jan 14th, 2014 · · ·

Uh...criticisms, criticisms... um... trying to think of criticisms... uh...
Damn, I can't think of any.
The reason your fic hasn't gotten many views is 'cos it hasn't got any cover art. Seriously. That's the only reason. I guess that's a criticism. Kind of.

Jioplip