• Member Since 11th Dec, 2011
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frutineo


I am aspiring to be a writter, so I have decided to go and see where it gets me.

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An Idea that popped up in my mind, the show has made several moments that, for my liking are just excuses to make us write shipfics, so this is what I made off, I have yet to read a story similar, but if anyone has just put the link in the comments.

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Comments ( 14 )

Random as hell, but ultimately enjoyable. Incomplete, you say?

*tracks*

Ahhh, i love smell of enjoyable randomness in the morning. Very good, pioneer, very good. Stalin enjoys!

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I first want to thank you all for having read this story, it was just something I initially planned to do as a one shot... maybe some other day I might be inclined to do a follow up, and even then it will be just one other chapter even so,l thanks for giving your time to read this.

Okay. Relationship statuses.

Pinkie loves Twilight
Applejack loves Twilight
Rainbow loves Twilight
Rarity loves Twilight
Fluttershy loves Twilight

*Trixie comes*

Twilight and Trixie love each other
Pinkie's reaction: :pinkiesick:
Applejack's reaction: :ajbemused:
Rainbow's reaction: :rainbowhuh:
Rarity's reaction: :duck:
Fluttershy's reaction: :fluttershysad:

When :pinkiesmile::ajsmug::rainbowderp::raritywink::yay: leave:

Applejack and Rainbow?
Pinkie and Fluttershy?
Spike and Rarity?

SEEMS LEGIT. :pinkiehappy:

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Great story. Moar. Now. :flutterrage:

I like the randomosity of it :twilightsmile:

Ok, just because you asked for it, I will write more about it... why is it that I wanted something serious and it ended up as random? 326002

Good, good, very good. i love the chaos.[img]mlfw2077-10838220-20101020am_I_trying_too_hard20approval20face20image20rating20reaction_face20response20sign20twilight_sparkle1[/img]

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This story was an unexpected joy. This was a great find. I agree with Purple Thunder, I would like to see more with this.

Concept was amusing, but the sentences were poorly parsed and it sounded like it was being read off of a transcript as opposed to really showing what's going on. Might be good after some very heavy editing.

920705 Already fixed with a little note at the end.

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Notable improvement. At least I think there was notable improvement. It seems alright now, the things that were bugging me don't stand out.
Thumbs up.

Needs a random tag as well... very rough and rather quickly paced as well

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